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Reviewer: Outlaw761 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 21 2023 9:58 PM Title: Chapter 3 - Marie is MUCH Smaller

I think you do micro scale situations very well! The way you describe Erin really makes her feel like a living landscape for Marie. Every little twitch and noise is an ominous sign of something to come. I can't wait to see what's next.

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