[Report This]Date: May 13 2023 4:02 PM Title: Chapter 7 - Total Mayhem
Heather is such a blunderhead
Keep her away when the city is fully populated
Date: April 25 2023 8:30 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Starting a New Project
good day,. can I ask if you have an email...or something similar where I can contact you?....I would have one suggestion for a small cooperation
[Report This]Date: April 02 2023 7:28 PM Title: Chapter 5 - Marie's rescue mission
Thos continues to be an outstanding story. I'd love if that shrinkrr could work in reverse and one of them grows gigantic! Who knows...maybe even Eddie will get his wish. I'd also love if Erin would have shrunken Marie in the bath tub with her playing with her like a tiny bath toy. More bare feet would be great as well!
[Report This]Date: March 24 2023 5:27 PM Title: Chapter 4 - Erin's turn to shrink
Another great chapter. I love "pretending to be unaware" situations. Your descriptions of Erin dealing with Marie's hot and sweaty foot were excellent. Marie accidentally swallowing Erin caught me by surprise, and I enjoyed it. Can't wait to read more!
[Report This]Date: February 21 2023 9:58 PM Title: Chapter 3 - Marie is MUCH Smaller
I think you do micro scale situations very well! The way you describe Erin really makes her feel like a living landscape for Marie. Every little twitch and noise is an ominous sign of something to come. I can't wait to see what's next.
[Report This]Date: February 09 2023 4:28 AM Title: Chapter 2 - Mini Marie's Struggles
Great chapter, and I love the double shrinking! I really hope Erin becomes aware of the super tiny Marie and enjoys her shrunken friend. I hope Erin plays with Marie with her gigantic bare feet. Looking forward to reading more!
Author's Response:
Thank you! More to come soon!
[Report This]Date: February 09 2023 4:00 AM Title: Chapter 2 - Mini Marie's Struggles
The smaller she gets the more fun we gotten. Looking forward to next chapter and how will the story continue.
ps. I also see the M/f tag and if she still at 0.0006inch ( or even smaller ;) ) it will blow my mind when the M/f story came.
Author's Response:
Oh there will be some in this story! Hope you enjoy!
[Report This]Date: February 09 2023 2:00 AM Title: Chapter 2 - Mini Marie's Struggles
Amazing stuff as always. Shrink rays really do be dangerous
Author's Response:
Thank you! And hell yeah they can!
[Report This]Date: February 09 2023 1:37 AM Title: Chapter 2 - Mini Marie's Struggles
Well that is one hell of a cliffhanger to end on! Really loving Erin so far! Hope she continues to play a major roll in future chapters.
Author's Response:
Thanks! More to come soon!
[Report This]Date: February 07 2023 2:58 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Starting a New Project
A solid start to a sequel. Really enjoyed the orginal story so I'll be keeping a close eye on this one!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much!