[Report This]Date: December 06 2023 8:22 PM Title: Friday Evening Pt.4
This chapter had eased my thoughts cause I was for sure that Tim would've stayed stuck inside the trash can for the remainder of the night. It was exciting and to be honest i'm curious about where his idea is going to lead him to *If* He survives jumping off the edge of the counter
Keep up the awesome writing!!
Author's Response: …And you know, I was wondering how Tim could get himself out of the trashcan without some kind of help, and just having him climb out seemed repetitive and uninteresting. A lot of the events of Friday evening developed after the fact: I knew where I ultimately wanted Tim to end up, but I needed to figure out how to get him there. Hopefully, you’ll like how the evening's events wrap up in the next chapter.
[Report This]Date: December 06 2023 1:45 PM Title: Friday Evening Pt.4
So good to hear from you again! And again, you surprise me with how
creative your scenarios are. Creative, that’s the word I think better describes your writing and makes your unaware scenarios so unique.
That extends to the characters relationships – you are very thoughtful of the
build up on the surrounding and the many sensations it arouses on the characters: big and small, you are able to show, not tell, leaving space for us, the readers, to wonder about what comes next.
This ability helps builds up to great inner dialogues, like the one at the begining (where you tell us a little about Tim’s situation and own view of
himself), followed by the emitional turmoil on the sink scene - Will he survive? Will he make it? How? When?… This keeps us invested and thinking. Makes your stories one of the best parts of this site.
Since you are wrapping things up and tihis is a practice, no theories this time - but thinking about Tim and McKenzie, what their previous dynamic was and what it became after him shrinking, how did they meet in the first place… all that might help in a future project (and giga mother… giga Natalie trying to find her son… kkkk the ideas just keep popping!).
Relax and don’t forget to take care of yourself while writing.
As always, thanks for writing and sharing! You are a hero! Stay safe!
Author's Response:
Glad to be posting again; it’s been almost a month since my last chapter:
I always like to have unique scenarios and actions instead of just the same old feet, tits, ass, etc., and I like to be creative and try new things, especially in the unaware genre. I find that every reader is different, and what one person likes or is into, someone else may not like, so any chance I have to vary the scenarios in my stories I like to explore.
While my plots and stories are usually action and dialogue driven, sometimes you need to hear a character’s inner thoughts to help explain and express their emotions, and the inner dialogue is something I like to use from time to time.
As far as the Tim and McKenzie dynamic that I know people are dying to hear more of, I think it’s important to remind everyone that even though they’re only about 4 years apart in age, for teenagers, that’s enough to put them into two different worlds: Tim’s still in high school, and McKenzie, despite being the quintessential girl-next-door, is in college, so the odds of anything happening between them is low. They really don’t have a lot in common, and despite Tim’s crush and her involvement in the events over the past week, McKenzie really hadn’t given him much thought before now.
Of course, one can never tell what kind of effect finding a tiny person will have on a person, regardless of their age difference, so you never know…😉
You’re one of my most avid readers and reviewers, and I’m always happy to hear from you. Thanks for all your support!
Date: December 06 2023 2:45 AM Title: Friday Evening Pt.4
Nice! I don't think I've ever seen someone tiny be trapped in a bottle unaware. I find I love it! Though I do hope Tim ends up in the popcorn and still not found by Julie. Especially if he ends up in Natalie's mouth, and has to stay hidden inside her mouth to avoid being found by Julie. Looking forward to the next chapter.
Author's Response: Well, a lot of the events of the Friday evening chapters required a little bit of thought about how to get Tim where I wanted him, so the bottle idea was a more of a means to an end, but I do like exploring different and exciting situations a tiny person can get themselves into instead of just feet, tits, ass, and mouth all the time. Ultimately, I’m happy with how the evening’s been progressing, and I hope you like the final 2 chapters (and yes, there will be two more, because I know how long the next chapter will be, and the events of the last chapter have already been laid out.
Thanks for the feedback, and, as always, thanks for reading!