Reviewer: aaron Signed [Report This]
Date: March 13 2023 4:41 PM Title: "Helping" Aunt Mary

Great chapter, really like Mary’s character and hope to see a lot more of her. Also would love to see James’ mom pay them a visit or maybe she could face time, possibly while he’s either painting Peyton’s toes or Mary’s. And she would be disappointed and upset at first until she notices the detail and designs on the toe nails behind him. To which point she may ask for hers to be done as well.

PS does Mary or Peyton have tiny friends or how would they react if their significant others were to shrink right in front of the, possibility during and argument or maybe even sex?
Anyways fantastic story that I can’t wait to see more of.

Author's Response:

That's SO funny! Peyton's SO does come into play, and I just wrote the rough draft of that chapter. Mary's character will be present throughout most of the story, but I'm really debating on James' mom because I imagine her a little more vindictive rather than playfully mean. I wrote a rough draft scenario with her in it and it might be a little over the top... but we'll see, who knows! Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: titantonic Signed [Report This]
Date: March 13 2023 3:28 AM Title: "Helping" Aunt Mary

Awesome as usual, I love Mary's personality.

Author's Response:

Me too! Thanks!