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Reviewer: ReclaimerChief17 Signed [Report This]
Date: February 20 2023 1:02 AM Title: An Awkward Dinner

Great to see ya again, carnage! Looking forward to seeing more of your stories! I messaged ya on discord as I had a question about another story :) 



Author's Response: Nice, I'll check it out.

Reviewer: Skye509 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 19 2023 7:20 PM Title: An Awkward Dinner

Another absolute banger. The carefree lighthearted reaction of having accidentally killed someone, while Peyton's only interest is in teasing her mother, is such a magnificent bit of character development. 

You tend toward family dynamics, and you do it so well. As much as I enjoyed Pregnancy Cravings, family-oriented stories are just an extra dimension. 

Our greatest joys lie in anticipation, and you definitely achieve that. I wish I could write with such patience.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! You don’t know how much it means to hear sincere words about my writing. I always worry how it comes across. It’s perfectly clear in MY mind… but how does it convey to those reading it? So to know I’m doing a good job is nice to hear.

It’s funny too, because I like reading rampagey stories the most… but I love writing family dynamic stories. Very odd to me. But yes, I love Peyton’s teasing and she is my favorite character thus far. Thanks again for your comment and I hope you enjoy the rest of the story!

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