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Reviewer: akilmilo Signed [Report This]
Date: March 10 2023 9:34 PM Title: Big Again... Mostly

Oh god, I love Mallory. It's the first chapter she's introduced in yet she already tries to save Derrek from her evil sister. If she will ever have a tiny boyfriend she'd surely be on the teasing -gentle side.



Author's Response:

From her "evil" sister lol. Yeah Mallory would fit in well in a lot of other stories on this site, but in this one she's just awkwardly misfiring.

Reviewer: greenpeon Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 07 2023 12:56 PM Title: The Belly of the Beast

I for one really appreciated the darker tone of this chapter, so while you're apologising to others, allow me to thank you. I'm glad Kelly is safe and that Penelope got her comeuppance. However Penelope's twisted orgasm while musing over Kelly's efforts coming to a fruitless end inside of her was incredibly hot. Again, thank you.



Author's Response:

You're welcome! I don't typically dwell on the darker stuff a lot, but it felt appropriate here to kind of bring the whole thing full circle. Penelope is a pretty typical giantessworld character, but this isn't a world that lets her get away with it lol.

Reviewer: wisecrack3 Signed [Report This]
Date: March 05 2023 6:32 PM Title: The Belly of the Beast

Loved it! I hope you're not through with the characters cause I've been loving the developments with them :D



Author's Response:

We've got some chapters in this story left to go, and I might revisit this setting someday.

Reviewer: RandomStoriesHQ Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 05 2023 6:05 AM Title: Big Again... Mostly

Just wanted to pop in to say that I am loving this story so far! I love the character development and the realism you’ve woven in, and the idea behind the nullifiers is genius! Looking forward to what’s going to happen next for our protagonists - hopefully Kelly can catch a break! It would be interesting to see Derrick introduce Quinn to his family in the future, since he was with them the two years he spent tiny. Can’t wait for what you have in store! 



Author's Response: Poor Kelly's got an easier road ahead of her from here on out. We've got a few more chapters to round out this story so we'll see some more of the characters, glad you liked them!

Reviewer: Alpha Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 05 2023 2:38 AM Title: Big Again... Mostly

OMG, That was and amazing chapter! Kept me on the edge of my seat the whole read. I actually got goosebumps reading the ending of this chapter. I am looking forward to more from this story. 



Author's Response:

Thanks, it was a close call for poor Kelly wasn't it?

Reviewer: greenpeon Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 01 2023 10:27 AM Title: Fifty Foot Woman from Mars

Another great chapter, I wasn't expecting Penelope to pop up like that. When I read the cruel content warning I was preparing for one of the girls to get careless and drop Derrick or Kelly into the crowd of young women who enjoy such great hits as "Gonna eat ya" and "It's fun to step on tinies".

Can people still develop the 'shrinking virus' or was it a one-time phenomenon? It would be the ultimate karma for Penelope to come down with the condition herself and experience the horrors of being partially digested and crushed by her former victim. Kelly could even house her with the spiders that creep her out so much.

Also excuse my morbid curiosity but if tinies can be killed via digestion, why can't they be drowned or suffocated too? How about if someone were to crush their skull under a high heel and liquefy their brains? Or simply pop them into a microwave oven, food disposal or incinerator?

I feel like Penelope simply chose the most cruel and intimate method of disposal. One that she could take her time 'enjoying' that evening in bed. (P.S. she's kind of an airhead for not just swallowing Derrick too)



Author's Response:

The shrinking thing was a one-time phenomenon, this is sort of a spinoff of my other story We Help Each Other Get By which details "shrinking day" in the first chapter, while there aren't any characters shared between the stories you can assume they experienced a very similar "day one."

Tinies actually can be killed via drowning or suffocation but it would take a really long time, for some perspective a scorpion can live at the bottom of a swimming pool for two days, I can't remember if I ever put an actual number on it in this universe but let's say tinies could probably go 3-5 days without needing to breathe. Dissolving via digestion is basically a constant race against the tinies impressive healing factor, they can probably sit in a stomach without feeling more than a tingle for hours, then it would start to hurt as the acid started to overwhelm their abilities to regenerate, actually killing a tiny via digestion would, as Penelope says, take days or even longer, and it would be a seriously unpleasant way to go. This allows for a certain amount of leeway for those who do want to vore their tiny friends, and as you can see it's a popular thing to do to them in-universe, but it's also a huge trust fall thing on the tiny's part. Like you said Penelope chose the most cruel and intimate method of disposal, she's pretty evil lol.

Regarding other kill methods I tend to take a similar approach across all of my "invincible tiny" stories, tinies can get permanently killed via things that totally destroy them, usually dismemberment. In the One Year Lease stories characters are variously threatened with blenders, scissors, and even guns, and while I don't really like to explore super violent scenarios much I'll comment as the author that any of those would do the job. A high heel might have trouble getting enough force to actually kill a tiny in this universe though.

Reviewer: akilmilo Signed [Report This]
Date: March 01 2023 3:16 AM Title: Big Again... Mostly

References in 7th chapter. Just lol 



Author's Response:

Yeah there are a couple in there lol

Reviewer: Alpha Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 01 2023 1:37 AM Title: Big Again... Mostly

Great Story and love this development. Looking forward to see where this will take us.



Author's Response: Thanks, tinies have it better in my stories than a lot on on this site but you've still got a few Penelopes running around.

Reviewer: ShrunkenSherlock Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 01 2023 1:14 AM Title: Opening Up

I like your worldbuilding a lot!



Author's Response:

Thanks, I try to make my stories immersive!

Reviewer: Russellp Signed [Report This]
Date: February 23 2023 1:36 PM Title: Big Again... Mostly

You are my favorite writer on this site. I think the creativity you bring to your stories and the way you build your characters is great. it's wonderful to have someone so talented writing gentle stories on the subject, where the story is as important as the size fetish. I'm a writer in Brazil, a published writer who makes money from it. I dare not write here because English is not my language. Don't ever stop writing and don't lose your signature and essence. Keep creating fantastic worlds and respecting how the worlds you create work. And keep bringing the stories with that touch of passions and happy endings. Happy endings and love stories keep selling big ;) There's already too much cruelty in the rest of the site. Use your talent for cruelty to be the spice and not the main dish. And thank you for the great moments you bring me reading your stories



Author's Response:

Thanks a bunch! I like romance and I like happy endings, so that's what most of my stories have. I definitely agree that cruelty will always be a spice in my works rather than a main dish, thanks for reading!

Reviewer: greenpeon Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 18 2023 8:17 AM Title: Opening Up

I know you mostly write gentle content but I'm hoping for some really cruel and messed up moments that will shock Quinn and Iris. I'm imagining Penelope abducting and torturing Derrick as revenge for Quinn's previous intervention and getting her kicked out of the dorms.

Loving the story so far, as always your characters are the most human and believable on the site. You take the time to really flesh out the details of your setting and plot, which makes for a truly immersive experience.

P.S. the SPIDERS safe word made me chuckle. It would be a real shame if Penelope was an extreme arachnophobe...



Author's Response: Thanks, I try to make my characters engaging, even in slower slice of life type stories like this one.

Reviewer: akilmilo Signed [Report This]
Date: February 17 2023 8:43 AM Title: Big Again... Mostly

About previous comment:

Imagine all physical activities the idol could do with all people who adore her and are willing to shrink for her. She also may pick one who performs better to stay after the fan meeting to "improve fan-idol relationship".



Author's Response:

We'll have some American style rockstars in the next chapter, one of these days I need to do a story set in Japan for you lol.

Reviewer: akilmilo Signed [Report This]
Date: February 15 2023 2:52 PM Title: Big Again... Mostly

If in this world, if some cute Japanese idol singer or some other celebrity makes a fan meeting but with a condition that you can only come at a tiny size, how many people do you think will come? That would be some great way to satisfy their fetish and please their fans at the same time.



Author's Response:

I'm sure that they have tiny fan meetings, though with tinies at only about 2% of the population they'd probably have a much smaller gathering. I could see it being done as a promotional thing anyways though.

Reviewer: yomama69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 13 2023 7:08 PM Title: Big Again... Mostly

I honestly couldn't think of much else to make this better, I'm eagerly awaiting more. 

Your whole character interaction is so life-like and exactly what you want to hear when reading. It's just so natural. 



Author's Response:

Thanks, a lot of people seem to like my dialogue and interactions.

Reviewer: tinyguy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 11 2023 10:23 PM Title: Regrowth

Another great chapter!
Love the self-referencing/4th wall break with the book titles… has me wondering if “Love at Any Size” is a hint about what we might see next from you in this universe… 

Author's Response:

I don't know if the good doctor is worth her own story, maybe a one shot or something. Anyways glad you're enjoying it!

Reviewer: Gentleanon Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 11 2023 9:23 PM Title: Regrowth

Loved seeing Kelly and Iris together. This story is very promising so far.


Sidenote: I can't believe this chapter is how I learned what silverfish are. English as a second language is fun.



Author's Response: Glad you're enjoying it, and you're welcome for the new vocabulary lol.

Reviewer: Kessler Signed [Report This]
Date: February 07 2023 5:17 AM Title: Somebody to Lean On

Welp, Penelope is definitely going to step out of line again. Genre savvy meta knowledge aside I'm surprised they can treat this as a win without Penelope in jail.


Author's Response:

Oh absolutely lol, at the same time they did get her kicked out of campus housing, so Kelly can at least sleep a little more soundly knowing she's not in the same dorm.

Reviewer: mowza Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 07 2023 12:47 AM Title: Busted

I really enjoy how *real* all the characters in your stories feel! The social implications in this one and how people interact are super interesting. Can't wait for the next chapter!


Author's Response:

Thanks, I do try with my character interactions.

Reviewer: tinyguy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 03 2023 5:03 AM Title: Busted

Great chapter! Nice to see you working the size shifts into the plot.  Outside of the Omega series on here, your stories are the only gentle content I’ve seen that deals with such extreme size differences. Intrigued to see where you take things going forward. All sorts of possibilities with how this latest chapter ended.

Author's Response:

Yeah the size shifts allow for some more extreme or less extreme size differences which makes them fun.

Reviewer: mowza Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 02 2023 6:58 AM Title: Big Again... Mostly

Vore is not really my thing but this was super cute and I'm really enjoying it so far!



Author's Response:

Thanks!

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