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Reviewer: ShrunkenSherlock Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 01 2023 1:14 AM Title: Opening Up

I like your worldbuilding a lot!



Author's Response:

Thanks, I try to make my stories immersive!

Reviewer: greenpeon Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 18 2023 8:17 AM Title: Opening Up

I know you mostly write gentle content but I'm hoping for some really cruel and messed up moments that will shock Quinn and Iris. I'm imagining Penelope abducting and torturing Derrick as revenge for Quinn's previous intervention and getting her kicked out of the dorms.

Loving the story so far, as always your characters are the most human and believable on the site. You take the time to really flesh out the details of your setting and plot, which makes for a truly immersive experience.

P.S. the SPIDERS safe word made me chuckle. It would be a real shame if Penelope was an extreme arachnophobe...



Author's Response: Thanks, I try to make my characters engaging, even in slower slice of life type stories like this one.

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