[Report This]Date: February 01 2023 5:46 PM Title: No Outside Food
Vore isn't really my thing but I thought I'd give this (and everything else you've written) a read after being blown away by Amazon Country and Abduction.
So far the world and character building have been just as incredible as in your other stories.
I really love the idea of the bracelets staving off the shrinking phenomenon when worn. Especially with the well thought out flaw of cellular damage requiring the wearer to take them off for several days a month. This creates obvious vulnerabilities and opportunities for malicious people or even playful pranksters to exploit.
I look forward to either Quinn or Iris neglecting to take those antacids before falling asleep. Or rescuing the tinies from another girl like Penelope, who intentionally made them suffer.
I can imagine Quinn and Iris being shocked by the horrific state the tinies are left in afterwards. Wincing at their visibly painful wounds/lack of skin (which will thankfully heal up due to their regenerative abilities). The experience serving to blow away their silly fetish-board preconceptions. Making them (Derrick included) realize that they'd been incredibly naive and foolishly dismissive of Kelly's warnings and concerns.
Author's Response: Thanks a bunch! Yeah vore is a bit of a niche, there will be other giantess content throughout the story though don't worry. I like the wristbands because it lets "tinies" live relatively normal lives but with the prospect of being small again always close at hand, along with the need to take them off a few days every month like you said. Quinn and Iris are in for some rude awakenings, like they probably imagine themselves as "mischievous" and it hasn't dawned on them that there are people out there who were really cruel to tinies.
[Report This]Date: February 01 2023 5:07 PM Title: No Outside Food
Quinn's newfound morals really made her character for me. Even if her and Iris still have a few things to learn about the abuse and cruelty Kelly and most tinies probably had to face. Hoping to see them continue to grow as characters as they are exposed to the ugly side of their fetish.
Author's Response: Yeah as much as Quinn and Iris fantasize about being evil tiny eating giantesses they aren't actually monsters. Kelly will have her own role in helping them figure out some of the nastier parts of the tiny experience.
[Report This]Date: February 01 2023 6:23 AM Title: No Outside Food
Glad to see Quinn has a conscience, and isn’t fully driven by her lust.
Iris was a little oblivious to the tension there, seemingly completely missing the implications that Kelly was molested and assaulted repeatedly during her time as a tiny.
I find myself hoping that Kelly gets an opportunity to school Quinn and Iris on some of the horrors of their particular fetish. They romanticize the act a little too much, with their opinions colored by the online fetish communities.
Author's Response:
Kelly is definitely the sane(st) person in the room, Derrick got sheltered from a lot of the harder parts of tiny life, and like you said Quinn and Iris are fetishists who are really only slowly starting to realize the objects of their fantasies are people too, though fortunately they do have a sense of conscience.