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Reviewer: MrD Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 18 2023 7:44 PM Title: Difficult Decisions

I have an idea to solve these problems... Has anyone ever determined if the Lizards are repulsed by the sounds of crushed pelvises? Just a thought...

That said, I'm almost more eager to read about Griselda and her sister's schemes prior to the events of the story.

Phenomenal work!



Author's Response:

The amazons need to crush more pelvises, it's the only way to test this hypothesis! Anyways you might say Griselda and Isabelle are much more on the unpleasant end of snu snu from what our protags are.

Reviewer: tinyguy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 17 2023 11:01 PM Title: Difficult Decisions

@Kessler I had similar thoughts until the dream sequence in this chapter… something tells me Griselda’s keeping a potential ace hidden up her sleeve.

Can’t wait to see what comes next.

Author's Response: Griselda's got a lot of tricks to muddy the waters of what's going on, and she gets stronger for every minute she's got access to the gold. That said there's more pressing matters for her to deal with obviously.

Reviewer: Kessler Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 17 2023 9:06 PM Title: Difficult Decisions

Maybe I'm missreading this but it seems like there's no possible way for Griselda's plan to go well. She wants to forcibly marry Dirk for the gold but that's a piece of information that has already spread too far to be contained. If this gets to the Queen or worse Dirk's friends in the Imperial army, which it probably would too many people know about this to keep it a secret long term, Griselda is fucked. Maybe she could get control over the gold for a few months or even years but eventually this will bite her in the ass. Of course she's gonna lose long before that, because the protagonists aren't going to lose, but even if she were to win this seems doomed and if she was smart she would've cut her losses the moment information security was broken.

At this point there are several civilians, a priestess, a dwarven engineer, and a smuggler with lines of information that stretch across the boarder all with varying levels of interest in this not working out for Griselda. She needs to silence all of them and do it before the information gets further, without knowing all the people this has been leaked to and without just disappearing lots of people all connected to her business in suspicious circumstances. The fact that she's even needing to try to keep this under wraps means she doesn't have the kind of political capital to endure it and the local climate doesn't seem disposed to tolerating this sort of thing in the slightest.

Fun story but when you think about it the villain's threat seems more how much damage can she do before this collapses on her rather than any real indication that her plans could succeed, then again that's the nature of these kinds of stories anyway so. . .



Author's Response:

Griselda underestimates the men opposing her and is generally used to falling back on wealth and power to get what she wants. In a way this is kind of a genderflip of the fantasy trope of the wicked noble who takes the male lead's love interest, as in those stories the target is often a stronger force than they initially appear to be.

Reviewer: theharper Signed starstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 17 2023 7:53 PM Title: Difficult Decisions

Damn it!

Well maybe they will escape during the fight?



Author's Response:

You'll have to see, I think you'll be pleased with how it all plays out.

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