[Report This]Date: January 08 2023 8:49 AM Title: A Day in Town
I like seeing things out of Cora’s eyes. The blurred line of relatabilty between the characters and the reader is pretty endearing too. Done with a delicate hand.
Nice work, green
Author's Response:
Thanks, I like to highlight just how strange Dirk is to the average Amazon, particularly one like Cora who wasn't good with men to begin with.
[Report This]Date: January 08 2023 6:15 AM Title: A Day in Town
Another awesome chapter. Damn what a follow up! I’m loving this world you are building.
A few questions: I like the whole muscle amazon aspect so I’m curious how brolic are they appearance wise? Another question, so you say amazons can only give birth to girls? Does that mean every girl born is an amazon? Or is it 50-50 between an amazon and a human sized girl? If it’s the latter that would be interesting to see how the dynamics play in this world with a mixed sized family.
Looking forward to chapter 3!
Author's Response:
I like to think that they just put on and keep muscle easier and how bulky they are depends on the amazon. Cora I imagine as fairly muscular, but still very visibly feminine, like a professional women's athlete in a strength sport rather than for example a female bodybuilder. Cassidy would be leaner, but with good muscle definition from working on the ranch all day, obviously even the out of shape ones can easily manhandle Dirk lol.
Amazons only have amazon daughters, which is why it's critical to have a population of normal sized humans around if they aren't out just raiding for men. Obviously this situation, with men at about 25% of the population, leads to some headaches which will be explored in later chapters.
[Report This]Date: January 08 2023 12:18 AM Title: A Day in Town
I really like Cora, and I’m glad Dirk got a chance to shoot something. Still…I’d be lying if I said I wasn’t a little hopeful the innkeeper or someone got a piece of him!
Author's Response:
He's got to be more careful huh? Don't worry Cora will have plenty of fun with him.
[Report This]Date: January 07 2023 11:06 PM Title: A Day in Town
Ok I'm very intrigued with the story. so far you have an independent man in a new land that's controlled by apparently very lusty horny Amazon women. my hopes are they don't destroy the man. and he finds a true love maybe with the current girl and have a good understanding how life is and both are happy we'll see.
Author's Response:
I'm not sure if you've read any of my stories before, but don't worry this doesn't end with Dirk as a mindbroken slave. Most of my male protagonists are independent man of action types, Dirk isn't in for a great time, but I think you'll be happy with where this tale goes.
[Report This]Date: January 07 2023 10:36 PM Title: A Day in Town
Whoa, wasn’t expecting either of them to make a move so soon with how they were acting. My man Dirk just went for it! Love how Cora is just totally unable to control herself around him. Seems like Dirk’s gonna have to be careful about the other Amazons.
Author's Response: Dirk is basically heaven sent for Cora, he's the manic pixy dreamgirl... boy, and the tomboy (tomgirl?) of her dreams, his foreign looks and attitude are just icing on the cake, if anything she's lucky to have run into him because most other men make her a stuttering mess. Dirk is, like most of my fantasy protagonists, a man of action type, and while he's understanding some of the Amazon dynamic he's also stepping in deeper than he realizes. Yeah other Amazons aren't quite as nice as Cassidy and Cora are, while men are protected in the Queendom they're also pursued aggressively and occasionally preyed upon. Dirk's a tough guy, but he's also somewhat out of his depth.
[Report This]Date: January 07 2023 10:15 PM Title: A Day in Town
Normally not into Amazon/mini-giantess stuff, but the role reversal is just done so well here.
Keep it up!
Author's Response:
Thanks, if the role reversal is your thing this should be a good one even if you'd prefer your girls a bit bigger lol.