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Reviewer: Darien Fawkes Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 15 2023 1:18 PM Title: Chapter 5

I really enjoy this story, especially the well written descriptive aspects. You have a very high level writing style which I respect. Looking forward to where you take this.

I try not to make suggestions because you're the author so you should only write what you enjoy. But I read your jack and the beans talk story ax well. My favorite part about that was the queen's best friend/advisor who was actually caring towards jack. I like giantesses who are powerful but have empathy. I wondered if mike could meet one like that. A giantess who showed more care than the average one. Then I thought "what about if he meets a giantess that develops a crush on him"? A beautiful young woman who wants to try to attract him, and finds it awkward given how easy it is for her to accidentally dominate and scare him with her size (as well as her "size" ;). This would possibly lead to Mike developing into a guy who likes giantesses more and he slowly becomes more enthusiastic over whatever fun actions his sisters and mother make him do.

I get that you probably have other ideas of your own, as this is your story, so only write what you want to write. I was just reading this and thought how enjoyable it would be to see a cute giantess with a monster of her own try awkwardly to get a boy who's afraid of her to like her. What are your thoughts on that? I'd like to know. Anyway keep up the great work!



Author's Response:

Well, that's actually a very nice suggestion (gentle domination is a kink I find particularly interesting myself, e.g. an innocent giantess who tries to shyly express her affection towards Mike but her massive size makes it difficult for her as even her pittiest move scares him away and sends him running...).I 'll see what I can do. Thanks for the constructive feedback!

Reviewer: zhangkui Signed [Report This]
Date: May 26 2023 4:09 PM Title: Chapter 5

Nice to see you update this story

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