[Report This]Date: May 27 2023 7:38 PM Title: Chapter 11 - The cracks deepen
You continue to hit exactly the right balance of relationship dynamics and size terror with your stories. Personally I like the dark tones and I think you’ve done an excellent job of portraying the relationship here.
I’m looking forward to seeing how far this goes for Ae Ri. I’d love to see her take some size from other people and tower over her lil’ Paulie the next time they meet.
(I’d also love if she grew significantly bigger, but I don’t think that’s likely to happen.)
Whatever the future holds, great job so far!
Author's Response:
It's a hard balance to keep so I'm glad I've not messed it up :) I think anyone who read my last story probably loves the darker parts of this stuff. I enjoy writing those bits most so it probably shows 😅
I won't give away any spoilers but her final size hasn't been 100% decided just yet. Maybe I'll push the boundaries and make her VERY large
[Report This]Date: May 22 2023 10:09 PM Title: Chapter 11 - The cracks deepen
Ok, this is some GOOD stuff! The abusive, manipulating, power hungry bitch parts with her soft side peeking through from time to time are written so well. Can`t wait for more. And, while seeing that this is more of a mini gts type of story, believe me when I tell you: I hope she gets fucking massive!
I loved your prison story already, and every chapter I get reminded why, your writing is fucking great! So I just wanted to let you know you have found a real fan in me :D . Hoping to read more of you in the future.
PS: Are you doing small commissions? Yeah, I love your writing! <3
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! I keep doubting my portrayal of Ae Ri and wondering if I've been too all over the place with her but it seems like I'm doing okay!
I'm actually not 100% sure on what to do with her final size to be honest. The height transfer tech wasn't designed to be for the more extreme transfers so I'm thinking there will be some diminishing returns. But yeah, I'm thinking her hunger for size is going to get her huge
I'm so, so happy to hear you enjoyed my first story too! It was such a niche theme with a lot of dark stuff so I wasn't sure how well it would do. There is for sure going to be a sequel for that too because I have ideas spilling out of my head. Plus, I can't end it on Vasquez being sad!
I haven't done any commissions yet and probably won't fit a while but I'd love to hear your idea. Can you dm me your email or message me on twitter? I think you can access both from my profile here :)