Date: January 14 2023 2:11 PM Title: Chapter 3 - Cracks in the foundation
Another excellent story so far.
The sense of impending doom at the hands of Ae Ri you're building here is astounding. In terms of her looks and personality, that's appealing directly to my perfect image of a giantess - starts off short and has a great big axe to grind with a few people.
I've no idea what her final height will be, but I'm looking forward to seeing Ae Ri lord whatever is it over her former boss. Along with anyone else who annoys her.
Keep up the great work!
Author's Response:
Hahah, from story right to the other!
Thank you for the kind words. I for sure have some interesting stuff building for Ae Ri and will be exploring all the axes she has to grind! There's going to be at least a few!
[Report This]Date: January 03 2023 10:59 PM Title: Chapter 3 - Cracks in the foundation
You're really starting hit your stride in this chapter. I enjoyed the vivid imagery and the tension of the restaurant encounter. Very uncomfortable. Looking forward to seeing how thing play out at the next transfer with Ae Ri mad at him.
Author's Response:
Thank you! Yeah, as someone that isn't the most social I can just imagine it happening. If I was Paul I'd be sunk down in my chair, red as a beet.
I've got some fun stuff coming up in the next part. My initial idea to keep this story short might be going out of the window 😅