[Report This]Date: July 13 2023 5:08 AM Title: Family Fight 1 - Changing Back?
Like they say: karma is a bitch. I am just stating the obvious but, man, it feels good from time to time: Alice can’t even complain since she is to blame for the whole ordeal - which is far from over.
Now, things didn’t turn out like I thought, but the interactions between micro Remy and god-like Lori were great albeit short. Any chance Remy will shrink more than 3 inches? He and Alice still have some reckoning to do.
I have the feeling we are we heading towards the finishing line, but
are we? You already have an idea for the end laid out?
Great chapter, with great interactions – the description of Remy’s perception... Good. Very good as always. No big theories this time… well, maybe one: Lori and her aunt decide to shrink Alice as punishment, but Remy is against it and a family fight begins.
There is also the possibility that, while Lori and her mother are making adjustments, a terrified Alice tries and shrinks both. You know, like a cornered animal would do – she will claim she did nothing wrong, that Remy has a foot fetish, that he loves her feet and that’s the reason he is so nice to her and should be hers…
Her what? Actually, weren't they meant for each other? Remy is just the right size...
A complete meltdown. She hates Lori, she hates her mother. She just
wants to “play” a little with little Remy. Yes, and “just for play let me see him naked, Nikki…”
I really can’t help myself when it comes to theories... But I also can’t wait to see what will come out of this family feud! Hate? Trauma? Love and foot fetish?? (yes, please!) More shrinking?? (yes, please!).
Hope my comment is useful. Thanks for writing and sharing! Stay safe and,
please, more Alice and Remy!
Author's Response:
thanks a bunch for the commentary in the review. we're definitely at the finish line soon. a few chapters of waiting for the aunt and then the end! alice and lori have to have their fight soon.
Date: July 08 2023 3:28 PM Title: Family Fight 1 - Changing Back?
Nice. Loved the interactions between super tiny Remy and aware Lori, though I am really hoping that a future chapter has a super tiny Remy getting lost on someone completely unaware. Especially if it is someone like Nikki that lives elsewhere and accidentally takes him home. I'm also still hoping for unaware full tour vore, but doesn't look like that is soon. Looking forward to the next chapter.
Author's Response:
i'm happy you liked it. i'm not sure if i'll be able to do full tour with what i have already written down. we're already reaching the end soon actually
[Report This]Date: July 08 2023 12:58 PM Title: Family Fight 1 - Changing Back?
I feel like a broken record but I love your story. I hope you'll continue like that because it will certainly be a contender for one the best stories on the website so far.
Author's Response:
thank you! i definitely want to finish this. it just takes some time to work on