great chapter

Sometimes I just get baffled at the amount of good stories this site has been producing along the last few years... it’s just impossible to comment as fast and as much as I would like. But I’ve been reading and wanting to comment on this story for quite a while now.

Big fan of Remy, Lori and Alice here and I agree with another comment: Alice can’t get away just because she back talked. 

And she won’t (I think). Even if you did not liked your sister or brother (which is not the case here, we know for a fact Lori is close and cares a lot for Remy), you would regard the person who puts him in danger as deranged or a criminal at the very least.

Am I saying Alice is a deranged criminal? No, I am saying that's how Lori must be seeing her right now. Not only she used and abused Remy, she took advantage of their trust.

As for Alice herself, I would say she doesn’t realize the meaning and, therefore, doesn’t really regreets her actions. She regreets being caught, she wants the yelling to stop. But she wanted to see Remy naked and she liked having him at her feet even as a speck.

The fact is Alice herself doesn't want to admit she is making advances towards Remy, but Lori is no fool and that’s why she insists on these two types of questions: why and what.

But the main question that remains is: will Remy be brought back right away or will he end up lost? Since both Lori and Alice are very emotional, I am betting their discussion will escalate and he will end up lost at the ground.

That’s a good thing because there is another layer here to explore: as I said before, Alice is not deranged. No, quite the opposite: Alice doesn’t think shrinking Remy was wrong because she thinks she is in control, meaning it’s all a game. Once Remy is lost and they can’t find him… 

And that’s not even the worse: what if they loose him and Lori thinks she crushed her brother without knowing? Seeing a angry Lori is bad, but a broken one… that’s when reality sinks in.

Now, for Remy it’s not about what he will do with Alice and Nikki and more about what he won’t do when he is back to normal. He’s been nothing but good to Alice and now I doubt he will even want to talk to any of them. Why should him when they saw him as a thing to play and not as a friend (much less family)? His silence towards Alice and her friend is more than justified and deserved since it would be the silence of a victim.

Well, that’s my theory for now. There is more I want to talk (that’s how invested I am in your characters and story) but the text is already big enough. 

Sorry for the big text and for any misspelling. Although I am fluent in english, it is not my primary language.

You have a gentle, funny and interesting story and I thank you from the bottom of my heart for sharing with us here. Please, more! MORE!

And so Lori gets involved...so cool. And Remy is still really tiny. I really hope something happens and Remy gets lost for more super tiny size scenarios. Especially if they are unaware ones.