Reviewer: theharper Signed [Report This]
Date: February 20 2023 5:11 AM Title: Further Developments

First let me tell you you're doing a great job.

I think Honoka needs his own time out to think about everything. A little vacation from everyone. Where he is not been smothered or babied all the time. And you could have all the girls running around for a little bit of comedy or something. I might help them how they might be smothering him.

It's just an idea. Anyways keep up the good work. Look forward to the next one.

Author's Response:

I appreciate that.  It gives me something to think about regarding the direction of the story.  Thanks for the review.