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Reviewer: purplereader Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: February 04 2023 7:51 AM Title: Even More School Life

Love the fluff in this chapter.


It is interesting how much Ayaka has grown when it's Honoka who is giving affection compared to when it was only Ayaka who gives. It's exciting to see the changes once they take it to the next level.


Great work as always 



Author's Response:

Thank you.  I appreciate that.  The overall vibe of this piece is that Ayaka's libido grows alongside her body.  From what I gather, she was already smitten with Honoka from the get-go; now she's simply acting on those feelings with no reservations, especially as she grows larger.  That was my intention behind this little fanfic anyway.

Anyway, thanks for the review.

Reviewer: theharper Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 03 2023 5:20 AM Title: Even More School Life

WOW. I wonder how he is going to act in the next chapter. We know that he loves her. But how long will he last at been so much smaller than her.



Author's Response:

Glad you're amused by things so far.  Given that this is a story involving magic, the possibilities are rather sizable (pardon the pun).  Anyways, thanks for the review.

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