Reviewer: Zaximus Signed [Report This]
Date: January 10 2024 9:34 AM Title: Chapter Fifteen: Justin

Hot damn I'm so glad to see another chapter drop for this story!

This was one of my two favorite stories of last year, one I've followed and will continue to follow, very closely. You're honestly just a master of the craft: your descriptions are always on point, you perfectly illustrate the scale of the individuals and paint a vivid picture of the scene being described.

As far as story wise, I'm loving the each chapter perspective shift and this seemingly gradual unraveling that seems to be taking place. Maybe I'm shooting at the wind here but it really feels like Jamie is going to push the Lord of the Flies portion the summary was warning about and ruin everyone's Gilligan Island vibe.

Very excited for this and wanted to stop by to let you know I'm reading and loving this and can't wait for more! XD

Reviewer: Krell Signed [Report This]
Date: January 07 2024 7:30 AM Title: Chapter Fifteen: Justin

I am glad to read another update to this story.  I look forward to reading each one when they appear.  

Thank you for time and effort.