Reviews For Marooned
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Reviewer: IamtheWalrus Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 15 2023 6:48 PM Title: Chapter 11: Daisy

I have so little to say to this PERFECTION but I shall try anyway. This chapter was EXACTLY what I want from this story! A good bit of character building for Jamie regarding her "relationship" with Jim that shows she isn't heartless while also being corrupted by her giant size. Daisy getting more focus as a living sex toy. Jamie being super condescending to the little people. And, best of all, Jamie using Daisy and Jim as living sex toys who she makes have sex! YESSSSS! PLEASE make more stuff like this! I want to offer some humble suggestions but I'm unsure what to suggest in my current state. I'm just in awe of this! GREAT WORK! 

Reviewer: writer27 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 15 2023 4:30 AM Title: Chapter 11: Daisy

It would be interesting if Jim and Daisy got bigger then the other three. Excellent chapter glad you are still writing. 

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