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Reviewer: VelvetSK Signed [Report This]
Date: November 04 2022 1:33 AM Title: Escape?

Chapter 6: A lot of people probably didn’t like this chapter due to its suggestion of animal vore, but that’s just my drunk opinion and I could be full of shit. Personally, I thought the bit with puncturing the man’s abdomen to keep him alive longer was clever.

Chapter 7: Good juxtaposition between older and younger ladies. It was clever having guys in the spice grinder. Classic bit with the queso dip. Very honey I shrunk the kids.

Chapter 8: Nice bit about the boys being more expensive than men. I thought the the bit at the end with the lone surviving boy was good.

Chapter 9: Multiple good scenes, some of them more arousing and others less, but it’s the combination of them that makes the chapter. My favorite was the one where the mom swatted the guy with the flip flop; not enough of that imo.



Author's Response:

Yeah wasn't sure if people would like the animal vore, but there's not many stories out there that feature that. So I included it to have something different. Appreciate your other points. Thanks for reading!

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