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Reviewer: Octosquid11 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 07 2023 4:40 AM Title: Prologue: The Binder

Very good sci fi so far. Have you, by any chance, read “Children Of Ruin” by Adrian Tchaikovsky? The Queen is very similar to These-Of-We in the story. If you haven’t, it’s a great book and I’d highly recommend the series (that series being the “Children of Time” series)



Author's Response:

I have not, actually.  I'll have to check it out.  Thank you for the recommendation!  Always nice to find a new series.

Reviewer: Onche Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 02 2023 10:14 PM Title: Chapter 4: A Foul Brood

This story is awesome !

I loved how the incorperants slowly are getting more and more powerful, plus the display of capacities they have like absortion and shapeshifting !

Are you going to continue this story, because i'm eager to know how big the Queen will get and how Humanity is going to resist !



Author's Response: Wow, didn't expect a review!  Thank you for the kind words.  I actually am working on another chapter.  With any luck, it should be out next week.

Reviewer: Nothing_Really13 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 12 2022 4:09 AM Title: Chapter 2: What You Eat

I adore stuff like this where someone transforms incrementally into a sexier being. Lots of details about each phase of the process down to the micrometers. Shapeshifters and absorption. Really excited for where this is going, and I hope you see this through to the end cause Earth doesn't stand a chance.



Author's Response:

Thank you for the words of encouragement.  Next chapter we're going to see another aspect to the Incorperants that I think you'll get a kick out of. 

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