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Reviewer: D W Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 25 2022 1:43 AM Title: Chapter 2

Again, a great story.  You just have to work on the grammar aspect. 

You seem to have a bit of confusion regarding he / his / him and she / hers / her; which makes following along who is doing or thinking what a bit hard to follow, though not too hard to figure out.

I understand English is not your first language, and give you great credit for writing in a language you did not grow up speaking.  Kudos to you.

If you want a quick and easy way to learn pronouns, might I suggest you look up and read "Read With Dick and Jane, Fun with Dick and Jane".  Very elementary reading; yet quite helpful in understanding pronouns.  https://www.goodreads.com/series/123534-read-with-dick-and-jane


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