Reviews For The Apprentice's Toy
Reviewer: The Count Signed [Report This]
Date: December 30 2022 11:35 AM Title: Pent Up
Author's Response: What did you prefer in the first chapter? I'd be interested to hear since I'm not 100% sure where to go from here. I was thinking about doubling down on the petplay now that he's gotten more possessive of the main tiny, maybe keeping him on his person during his day at the academy. Stuffed in his shoe or underwear, that sort of deal.
Date: December 30 2022 11:35 AM Title: Pent Up
Glad to see this continued, it's really good! I won't lie, I liked the first chapter more, but that's just personal preference I think, some of it's just not my thing, but it was still written well. The sock's logo and thinking how 'you' used to wear one had me interested to hear more, and I liked how you built the world in part 2, which explained some of that. Great work!
Also the bratty boy is characterized pretty well, would love to see some more unorthodox treatment like being forced to sleep in the shoe and what-not.
Author's Response: What did you prefer in the first chapter? I'd be interested to hear since I'm not 100% sure where to go from here. I was thinking about doubling down on the petplay now that he's gotten more possessive of the main tiny, maybe keeping him on his person during his day at the academy. Stuffed in his shoe or underwear, that sort of deal.
Reviewer: SeSawTer Signed [Report This]
Date: September 26 2022 9:55 AM Title: Pent Up
Date: September 26 2022 9:55 AM Title: Pent Up
I hope to see more from you
Reviewer: Barachiel Signed [Report This]
Date: September 03 2022 6:38 AM Title: Pent Up
Date: September 03 2022 6:38 AM Title: Pent Up
That was a fun story! Especially with the bratty perfect giant.