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Reviewer: D W Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 18 2023 2:31 AM Title: Chapter 3

Really great story.  The subject matter is terrific and enthralling.  Love how Sabrina, and her mother, grandmother, and great grandmother {bit confused whether Martyna is her mother or grandmother. Martyna kind of falls into the realm of a young grandmother or an older mother} all hold this power and teach it to their female offspring.

Would like to hear more about the shrunken nazis Martyna put in a deep pot to feed off of their fear.

As a personal request, could you have Sabrina put the guy on the couch who said "Get her to put him up her butt" actually put that guy who said it up her butt?  Just thinking it would be an ironic form of justice.



Author's Response:

Hey thanks for the feedback, I enjoyed reading your thoughts.

Martyna is indeed Sabrina's Grandmother, they pass their skills down through the generations. As the series unfolds you learn that there are other types of Witches covens with different types of skills, interests and codes.

The story does go back to explore more about Martyna and her early days exploring her witchhood, but then also explores her rise to power during wartime.

Yes indeed Sabrina does deal out some justice on the butt guy, and yes, there might be an ironic form of justice involved :-)

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