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Reviewer: Iunno Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 17 2022 10:22 AM Title: The Morning After

Since you said this story is short I'm assuming she's already gotten rid of them and next chapter she's gonna show him recordings of her doing so or something. And the last one will be him being soul crushed and subservient because of it. Really like this story



Author's Response:

Tysm! There's a very wide range of possibilities but soul crushing is definitely an apt descriptor!

Reviewer: tinyguy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 16 2022 9:56 AM Title: The Morning After

Great story. Feels like the start of something big, similar to Deliverance

Author's Response:

This is actually a pretty short one, currently aiming for about four chapters to be released in quick succession of one another! Chapters 1-3 are all pretty much already finished from about a year ago, and being edited and released now, but the original conclusion was never actually completed so that's the only one I'll need to actually completely start from scratch. 

Reviewer: Enoch Signed [Report This]
Date: August 15 2022 11:51 PM Title: The Morning After

Very good start. 

Looking forward the following !!



Author's Response:

Ty! This was an idea that was floating around for a while and after dozens and dozens of rewrites I had something that resembled a story thread! Most of it has already been written, it just has to be edited to meet my current standards a year afterwards lmao.

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