Reviewer: sok06 Signed [Report This]
Date: September 27 2022 10:03 PM Title: Graceful Debt Services

it's hard to top the sense of humiliation and just plain defeat that you throw on your characters. You really have a talent for creating unescapable situations

Author's Response:

Thanks for the kind words, sok! I put a lot of work into my misery, lol.

Reviewer: johnsmith10992 Signed [Report This]
Date: August 12 2022 6:10 AM Title: Graceful Debt Services

Interesting setup and characters. Fan of your work, and have enjoyed the themes you tend to stick to. I only wish this had more variety past the foot stuff. Totally respect that this is the story’s focus, but expanding upon other stuff like boobs, mouth, booty, pussy etc would make those foot parts that much more special.

Author's Response:

First. Thank you for the review and comments!

I'm definitely aware of the foot heaviness of this story (I like what I like, blah blah). I have already accounted for part of chapter 5 and most of chapter 6 to expand into greater explorations of certain bodies ;). I'm traveling at the moment, but hope to be able to push these out over the next week or two.

As a whole, I'm shooting for 10 chapters total, so I do anticipate one other chapter beyond the above to be less foot focused (at least based upon my rough outline and the tones and themes I want to use).

Let me know if there's anything in specific you'd like to see!

Reviewer: bobbylaws1 Signed [Report This]
Date: August 10 2022 12:19 PM Title: Graceful Debt Services

Good start! It would be interesting to get a little more information on what Olivia's old relationship was like with the Kellers to get a sense of the mental transition they're going through.  Maybe previously they were friends and Olivia looked up to them or something or they saw her as a sister but now she is a giantess to them.  Maybe they previously knew Olivia had the shrink ray and were intrigued by it. Maybe she had previously been flirty with them. Also love the footplay...maybe she'll even shrink then tinier as a special punishment? Maybe Tiffany will be a huge giantess to him or he'll temporarily shrink so small he'll have to explore the wrinkles of Olivia's gigantic soles like they were mountain ranges. Great work!

Author's Response:

Thank you!

I'm looking to wrap this up in about 10 chapters so there'll be a lot of exposition involving Olivia's backstory with the Kellers.

Hunter definitely does not have a good plan ahead.