[Report This]Date: January 05 2023 1:42 AM Title: Amber
Brilliant. just great. Many wanted to see what happened to Amber after the conclusion and you certainly did not disappoint Green. It has been a masterful chapter. I like that she was able to fix her relationship with Eve. But honestly I didn't like Eve's initial aggressiveness towards Amber. After all when she met Evan she wasn't exactly a saint. She wanted to enslave Evan and take his house. If the little boy hadn't made her fall in love with him, we'd have another story of the cruel giantess who gets away with it. As the saying goes "Let the one who is free of sin cast the first stone."
I guess Green is teaching us with this chapter that life takes many turns. We never know what will happen in the future. Well at least that's what this chapter conveyed to me. :)
Author's Response: Eve probably has some guilt tied to Amber, both for how she used to be and for how everything turned out. Amber's story has certainly been a winding road, but I like to think people can change if they want to, Amber had a big fall and it made her realize that her old life might not have been one she was happy with. Anyway glad you liked it!
[Report This]Date: January 03 2023 10:49 PM Title: Deandra and Warren
Great chapter! I think we were all really curious to see what became of Amber after the main story and you delivered a satisfying conclusion (unless we'll see her again in the future) I look forward to reading more of anything that goes on in this universe.
Author's Response:
I have to admit I was kind of surprised that so many people wanted to follow up with her, my original intent with the story was always to imply in the ending scene that she goes on to be a better person, but I guess a lot of people wanted to see it for themselves. Anyway I'm glad the Amber chapter delivered, and I'm sure we'll see more of this universe.
[Report This]Date: January 03 2023 5:16 PM Title: Amber
This chapter brought back so many elements from the original story, which was great to see.
Echoing what was said a few reviews down the page, the best one shots definitely leave you wanting more. For every old question this chapter answered, it seemed to leave something new to explore… How will things turn out for Ben? What is life like for the therapist Dr. Brown and her husband? What sort of stories do the Tiny Affairs agents like Laurie’s friend have from the field?
Could also be cool to see another chapter featuring Warren and Deandra at some point… the latter seems like she would have a pretty cool backstory.
Keep up your incredible storytelling, we all appreciate it!
Author's Response: Glad you liked it, there are probably endless possible stories from the Tiny Affairs office, Ben I see staying with Laurie in the same way Amber does, since like her he doesn't really have anywhere else to go. Anyways thanks for the review!
[Report This]Date: January 03 2023 8:55 AM Title: Amber
Aaaargh that was so great! Commando SW Rambo Amber for president. Seriously that was such a fantastic story, with Reunion, slimed and now this you’ve been knocking out some of your best work ever recently. Amber emerged as easily one of the most compelling characters in OYL and it’s so cool to see her on her own adventure here. Also I love the wisdom of her realization that rather than a new romance what she really needed was a big juicy steely eyed WIN to feed the inner shark haha.
Author's Response:
Amber was a good villain in the main story, but I always kind of thought she'd find a way to happier state after the events of it. In the end yeah what Amber really needed was that win, something that would bring her confidence roaring back and as an added side bonus prove that she had in fact changed for the better.
[Report This]Date: January 03 2023 8:14 AM Title: Amber
This was definitely the one I was interested in the most, and you knocked it out of the park. I'm left wanting more lol.
Author's Response:
The best one shots leave you wishing there was more in my opinion, thanks for the review!
[Report This]Date: November 03 2022 1:53 AM Title: Charles and Bethany
Another outstanding chapter!
Can’t wait to see how the chapter with Amber turns out when you get around to posting that one.
Author's Response:
Thanks, I thought Charles deserved something nice.
Date: October 18 2022 6:20 PM Title: Deandra and Warren
Hello!!
I love your stories and that all these stories are gentle. You are one of the few who writes gentle GTS and that is great.
Thanks for these chapters where you develop the other characters (like Deandra and Warren).
I don't know, this is a suggestion but... An episode with Amber and Laurie would be great. Maybe Amber can worship Lauriel's feet and end up liking her. I don't know, it's just a suggestion and I hope it gives you an idea for a new chapter.
Thank you very much for each story and all the nice details in each chapter.
Author's Response:
My ideas so far are showing Charles life leading up to his shrinking and one showing how Amber acclimates to tiny life, I'll probably return to this collection sometime after Halloween.
[Report This]Date: August 10 2022 1:06 PM Title: Deandra and Warren
@Greenanon Intriguing, can’t wait to read more!
One question I’ve had since first following your work; how do you manage to write your stories so quickly? You’re probably one of the fastest writers I’ve seen on this site
Author's Response:
Education and employment which require a lot of structured writing on a fairly quick timetable, along with a fast typing speed. I also find writing fiction very relaxing, it kind of helps me unwind after a busy day. I'm not sure what else to say about it.
[Report This]Date: August 10 2022 3:49 AM Title: Deandra and Warren
Amazing way to begin this series, and with such a short turnaround time after Abduction… outstanding!
Definitely intrigued to see what you come up with next for this setting.
Would personally love to see a follow-up chapter for Amber at some point. All sorts of interesting scenarios there. Perhaps she meets a charming guy and you can work some more of that newfound M/f magic we saw in Abduction… would be a great role reversal from the original story.
Also wouldn’t mind seeing more of Deandra again. Would be cool to see more of her backstory and how she developed such a strong stance on the issue of shrinkees.
Author's Response:
I have a few ideas, I was thinking a chapter on Dr. Nicole, the bubbly vet with the "grooming" practice, probably another on Warren and Deandra, and probably one for Amber at some point. I don't know what to think about the fact people want more M/f out of me lol, but yeah that could be fun. I will probably add to this series now and then as inspiration strikes me.
[Report This]Date: August 10 2022 2:10 AM Title: Deandra and Warren
NICE!!! Very nice story, and a very lucky Warren to be in between Deandra's sweet butt-cheeks as she sits down and grinds her ass upon him.
The care Deandra shows for Warren prior to his shrinking, and the devotion that evolves between them as they both develop a genuine care and love for each other is a great touch.
What is next for the duo?
Author's Response:
Probably easing into the routine of Deandra's busy work life, as well as their wedding at some point, which occurs before the main story.
Date: August 10 2022 12:38 AM Title: Deandra and Warren
Really glad to see this world back!
Author's Response:
Yeah it's a nice one isn't it?
[Report This]Date: August 09 2022 11:41 PM Title: Deandra and Warren
I’m glad we got to see these two fleshed out a bit more. It was definitely a sweet story.
Author's Response:
They seemed pretty popular despite a relatively small appearance so I figured they were a good place to start.