[Report This]Date: September 13 2009 8:09 PM Title: Chapter 1
Another amazing story Nostromo! thanks, I am eager to see how it will develop!
[Report This]Date: August 30 2009 1:26 AM Title: Chapter 1
Hey, I haven't posted a review yet! That's because words don't do the story justice. Superlative.
Author's Response: thank you, DX. i intended this tale to be short, focusing on the comparison of the little guy's schedule before and after, but then I fell in love with Anna and Claire. So now, it's running its own course, I guess.
[Report This]Date: July 28 2009 5:13 AM Title: Chapter 1
Well, I read the 3 parts and, as usual, corrected the many grammatical errors which is excusable as it appears English is not your first language. I thoroughly enjoyed the first chapter while anticipating more exciting acts being centred on the shrunken male. However, the story was well written. I would have made Claire become rather resentful of the 'jouet' as most dominant lovers would be and consequently would have her dispose of her 'rival' in the most intimate manner; but that is my way of concluding such a yarn.....in a more exciting finale.
Author's Response:
Well, since my tale is not yet finished, i can't see there is a more or less "exciting finale" to discuss. But yes, it probably won't be the ending you wish, I'm affraid.
Date: July 15 2009 1:25 PM Title: Chapter 1
amazing story
Author's Response: Hi rubber! Thanks, man!
[Report This]Date: July 12 2009 10:23 AM Title: Chapter 1
I was wondering why you didn't put it up here^^ Of course you get my best rating for your awesome story :) Aaand, how're you doing :ppp I'm seeking out for next chapter of course :)
Author's Response: Thanks, Zol ! Yes, I was a bit slow bringing this tale to the site, I must say. ;-) But hey, glad you could give it a good rating, after all these tales, I'm always worried of getting short of ideas!