Date: August 04 2022 6:50 AM Title: Chapter Three, Hell
Knowing the premise before I dived (heh, get it?) in, I had an uncomfortable sense of dread, even as Micha and Juni were snarking it up with one another. You're pretty good at bouncing dialogue between our main couple.
Depicting giantess scenes tends to be tough, since it's hard to get a reference and sense of scale, but you've done that in a rather clear and concise way. From the opening, where Micha is lying on the bed, you were able to set up the size difference very quickly.
Even in the heavenly chapter "his Angel", when one Mini was cussing Juni off, even though nothing dark was hinted at, you managed to make it a tense scene. Maybe because, as I've mentioned before, I knew what kind of story this would be, but you let the scene play out, instead of trying to let people know of Juni's dark side. With the third chapter added, it makes the context that much more terrifying.
I suppose it's inevitable that Micha and Juni are set for conflict. It does appear, when Juni was getting ready for her date with Micha in ch 3, that she does recognize this disparity in her thinking. Looking forward to see how this plays out.
Author's Response:
Thanks so much for the review! I’m so happy to hear that you gave it a try. The opening scene had to be one of my favorites to write. It was a nice change of pace to do things from a tiny perspective. Also I’m glad chapter 3 added some depth to previous ones. More conflict, good times, and classic size shenanigans are definitely on the horizon. I hope you continue to swim on :)