[Report This]Date: July 25 2022 9:13 PM Title: Chapter Two, His Angel
Great story so far, especially for your first release!
The dynamic between Juni and Micha is a particular high point for me. Their interactions are cute, playful and realistic. Their use of callbacks and in-jokes is fun to observe and join in with as a reader.
The description of the mouthplay in this chapter is also a highlight, with a calculated build up, intense execution and humorous fall-out. A sense of humour and teasing, even in stories where the giantess may be cruel, is always welcome to me.
Hope to see this continue and look forward to reading more of your work!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much!! I really appreciate it. The best relationships in my experience have a good amount of levity to them, so I'm glad that came through in the writing. I hope to continue to be a story you can enjoy :)