Reviews For Magical Mishaps
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Reviewer: Edgedej4 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 10 2022 12:37 PM Title: The First Mishap

This is far better in my opinion. Maybe the first chapter was simply formatted weirdly, but this seems like a big improvement. The description is nice, a bit on the small side but there. The grammar is far better too, there’s still some formatting issues here and there. But nowhere near to the extent of the first chapter. And tbh i can see why, having also published some stuff on this site. So it’s understandable. 

This was enjoyable, looking forward for more.

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