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Reviewer: D W Signed [Report This]
Date: May 30 2022 2:29 AM Title: Chapter 8. The Powers.

Ok, Jennifer is a witch with the powers of Satan behind her; but Satan was cast out of heaven by God simply by God raising his hands.  Then God sent the arch angel Michele to defeat Satan and cast him and his fellow rebellious angels {i.e. demons} into hell with Beelzebub.  So Jennifer and Satan are already on the loosing side.

Did you know, an ancient belief / text tells that Lucifer, an arch angel, loved God so much that he / she / it (?) took on the roll of evil incarnate to test humanities devotion to God at God's request?  That Lucifer turned evil simply to serve God as the bad guy {i.e. ASSHOLE PIECE OF SHIT} in order to serve God and show God his love.

Now I'm no theologian; but my money is on God and that of Good.

You seem to eager to write this and your last chapter, often repeating yourself needlessly.  My suggestion, write out your chapter, then wait a day to post it after you have proof read it.

Any chance of guys ending up in giantess butt-crack again?

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