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Reviewer: blaine369 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 17 2022 5:50 PM Title: Chapter 1. Lindsey heads out.

Is that a kid in that picture, what the fuck



Author's Response:

Nope. 

Reviewer: D W Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 04 2022 1:57 AM Title: Chapter 1. Lindsey heads out.

Nice story, and who wouldn't want Lindsey Horvath as an 80' Giantess?  She's quite the hot cutie.

Your story line is very interesting.  My only complaint is your use of run on subjects in long paragraphs.  You have multiple people speaking, all in the same paragraph; which makes them slightly confusing and overly long.

Separate the subject matter into smaller paragraphs and your story will flow much more easily.

One has to wonder if Lindsey will find Jennifer, and more importantly put that giantess ass of hers to use on Jennifer or others?



Author's Response:

Thank you for the nice comment and the advice.  I will try to the the next chapter that way.

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