Reviews For Maneater
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Reviewer: Edgedej4 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: May 03 2022 12:33 PM Title: Chapter 1

Amazing piece. I do think some use of italics for some thoughts for the characters could be useful and could assist in pacing out some paragraphs,  but that’s just my personal preference. Overall, this is not only written well, but is an exciting piece.  Good job

Reviewer: BartSchaf Signed starstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: May 02 2022 9:36 AM Title: Chapter 1

I literally made an account so I could make a review and tell you how great that was!

Reviewer: Octosquid11 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 02 2022 2:16 AM Title: Chapter 1

Holy shit! That was AMAZING! I really hope you write a second chapter to this even if it is marked as completed. Please. I beg you, keep up the good work

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: May 02 2022 1:18 AM Title: Chapter 1

Whoa! That was hot! 

The part where Judy knew the shrunken person was there and toyed with them was great! 

Also, what is the main character’s name? There’s the friend Cass and the giantess Judy, but I think I might have missed the shrunken person’s name. 

The best part was Judy telling the tiny that she will take them home to play with them. That was amazing! 

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