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Reviewer: vegetaboy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 20 2022 4:59 AM Title: Dangers of Voyeur

This was a great chapter!

I love the sneaking around aspect as well as them using the spaces in the floor to their advantage. 

It was also a nice touch having multiple women there, as well as the mother, aunt and grandmother. Not a lot of people include grandparents in such hands on (or feet on in this case XD) scenarios, and I think that is a real shame.

It was a nice touch adding her in :D

And that ending! Damn he would be traversing his mother's toe like an environment of lavender scented atmosphere. 

Great work on this chapter, loved reading it. 



Author's Response:

Thanks! I never normally write in much older women (In this case, the grandmother was only in her 50's or she's not exactly ancient) but in a scenario when a much older family member plays a part to obliviously killing her grandson was a story to tell.

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