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Reviewer: Oldest18 Signed [Report This]
Date: February 12 2024 9:18 PM Title: Baker's Delight

A teaser of an idea: A loser boy is secretly in love with the most popular girl in the class, he buys a shrinking ray and sneaks into the girl's bedroom to spy and then at the "right" moment to unshrink and confess his love. But his plan backfired, he shrinks himself into a micro on the girl's desk, but the ray stays at normal size. The girl comes home and sees ray, thinks it's a birthday present from her siblings. She tests the ray on a couple of breadcrumbs on her desk, unknowingly shrinking the microscopic guy among the breadcrumbs to nano. Girl brushes away the breadcrumbs, the size of small particles, against herself and off the desk. This sends the guy flying, he lands between her stomach and slides down an opening in jeans and panties, gets stuck on the girl's labia. Later, girl masturbates, her fingers drag the guy around her labias and finally send the guy to the deepest part of her vagina. The guy's last hours in life were to be crushed by her flesh, or drowned in her cum, or melted by her scents.

Reviewer: Oldest18 Signed [Report This]
Date: February 12 2024 8:24 PM Title: A Mysterious Gun Lookin' Thing

First of all, I just want to say that I have been following your stories for a long time now. I really love the way you write, I love nano, I love unaware. Hope you understand how much I appreciate your work. Never stop, you are great!

Have you thought about commissions? or make free stories based on requests in the comment field or direct messages? (I have several ideas anyways).



Author's Response:

Thank you very much, that is very generous praise to receive from a reader and fellow fan of unaware nano content.


And if you ever want to send me ideas, you can always find me in the GiantessWorld discord server. No guarantee I'll use them, but I am beginning to consider taking commissions soon. 

Reviewer: Da Boss Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 02 2024 3:48 AM Title: Baker's Delight

Fantastic work on this chapter.  Very fleshed out, and very in detail with the vore scene.  Looking forward to whatever you do next! 

Reviewer: Grimagoobah Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 13 2023 5:08 AM Title: Big Bully

Welcome back! It's always fun to see this story update, the scenarios hit a particular niche that never really gets touched upon too often.

Kristy is starting to rack up a body count now, huh? Doesn't seem like she's too fussed about her brother going missing either. Either way, fun chapter!



Author's Response:

Thanks! I'm always around, lurking.

Kristy is a bit of a ditz so not much fazes her

Reviewer: barabba9000 Signed [Report This]
Date: November 12 2023 5:25 PM Title: A Mysterious Gun Lookin' Thing

Hey, glad you're back! I'd like to suggest you a story based on a previous story I've read. How can I contact you? 



Author's Response:

You can find me in the GiantessWorld Discord server

Reviewer: Griffter Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 12 2023 5:25 AM Title: A Mysterious Gun Lookin' Thing

I'm thoroughly enjoying all of the scenario's you're bringing to the table, both the unaware and aware scenes, the idea of being shrunken twice or three times with it and the sheer scales you describe so well, progressive shrinking is easily my favourite type of scenario and few rarely encapsulate so well, from the differing landscapes, the comparisons between sizes to the hopelessness and the indifference from the, now goddess', perspective - everytime I see this updated I'm excited to read it!

Had to create an account simply because I didn't want that to go unknown, I hope to see and read more from you in the future!



Author's Response:

Thank you for the review. Continuous shrinking and nano sizes are the best.

And to create an account just to leave a review, that is an amazing thing to see as a writer so I hope to never disappoint in the future

Reviewer: gryter4 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 11 2023 9:22 PM Title: Big Bully

I'm glad you didn't abandon this story. it's one of my favorites, I love it, I'm constantly waiting impatiently for the next chapters ( I hope the next ones will be released quicker). this story perfectly shows the ultra-microscopic size which i love. My favorite chapters are the ones with the feet stuff, so I am secretly hoping that there will be more of that. 



Author's Response:

Thanks! This series is definitely a little sporadic with updates, but if nano-size and feet are your thing, I am working on a new standalone story involving just that, though I'm going to have a few chapters complete before I upload them. Be on the lookout! 


Reviewer: barabba9000 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 13 2023 4:34 PM Title: A Mysterious Gun Lookin' Thing

Welcome back! Missed your updates! 



Author's Response:

Thanks. Life got real hectic for me for the past couple of months

Reviewer: Da Boss Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 10 2023 2:11 PM Title: Science Project

Love the concept of this and just how insignificant Eric is compared to Kristy! 

Reviewer: christiawi9 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: February 10 2023 11:35 AM Title: A Mysterious Gun Lookin' Thing

These stories are so good. The only down side is that they're too short and they leave you wanting more and more.

Great writing and even better premise. I look forward to every new chapter and hope to keep seeing more in the future.

Reviewer: DragonSnu Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 07 2022 7:34 AM Title: Weed Killer

I always love checking in on this story, you do such a great job with it!


as for what to see in the future I’d be interested in a (non related) milf/cougar? I love unaware but no setup is coming to me rn, but I will say if you take this suggestion give her a wild bush for me ;)



Author's Response:

Thanks!

You may see your suggestion in the near future


Reviewer: Valanath Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 06 2022 2:55 PM Title: Weed Killer

This was great! You really have a talent for writing unaware scenarios. Can’t wait to see more!



Author's Response:

Thanks!

Reviewer: barabba9000 Signed [Report This]
Date: December 06 2022 1:26 PM Title: A Mysterious Gun Lookin' Thing

Oh well, I made the same comment twice XD BTW, take a look at it. It definitely suits your style. Maybe a shrinking lottery with people forced to live in a Nano city... But it wouldn't be an unaware story. And your unaware stories are simply stunning 



Author's Response:

All Good XD

And I gave it a read, really good stuff. And thanks again!

Reviewer: barabba9000 Signed [Report This]
Date: December 06 2022 5:35 AM Title: A Mysterious Gun Lookin' Thing

Love the last chapter.. Take a look at the story brobdingnagians business, from the 10th chapter Impact... Pretty sure it could inspire you 

Reviewer: Just Some Dongus Signed [Report This]
Date: November 26 2022 2:47 AM Title: Treated Like Dirt

Awesome stuff! Super rare to see unaware hyper-micro size stuff, you nailed it! :)



Author's Response:

Thanks!

Reviewer: LtShadow Signed [Report This]
Date: November 16 2022 11:48 PM Title: A Mysterious Gun Lookin' Thing

Your writing is so good! so cool to meet a fn of these kind of unaware story's. Would love to see you do one of a tiny lost in a garden!



Author's Response:

That scenario might just be in the pipeline for a tale down the road

Thanks for the review. 

Reviewer: VelvetSK Signed [Report This]
Date: November 13 2022 7:51 PM Title: Deep Into The Depths

Love episodic stories like these. They make for easy reading lmao.


Really liked the premise and executions of chapters 1 and 3. They both did a good job capturing the terror of shrinking, although I think chapter 3 was better. Props on chapter 4. Shaving is a super rare scenario. Dialogue was hit or miss in some chapters, so I guess work on that.



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review. I feel these stories work better in episodic form since they're short and get to the point. I try to capture both horror and the risk one will take when lust takes over. 

Regarding the dialogue, that is a weak point of mine. I think I can take an educated guess at which dialogue was a miss. That's on me trying to push a chapter though when I was in a writer's block. Thanks for the critique  

Reviewer: barabba9000 Signed [Report This]
Date: November 13 2022 2:29 PM Title: A Mysterious Gun Lookin' Thing

Love this story! Please read the story brobdingnagians business. The tiny cities under the glass with the Chinese manager walking above them in the office. Maybe you could write a spinoff chapter, looks like a story you could appreciate



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review. And thanks for the recommendation, I'll give it a read

Reviewer: Da Boss Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 13 2022 8:00 AM Title: Deep Into The Depths

One of my favorite chapters of yours!  Really well written, looking forward to whatever you write next! 



Author's Response:

Thanks!

Reviewer: barabba9000 Signed [Report This]
Date: November 06 2022 1:32 PM Title: A Mysterious Gun Lookin' Thing

Hope next time he is plastered under the giant's sole. Loved this chapter. 



Author's Response:

You never know what could happen in future tales

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