Date: May 31 2022 5:59 AM Title: Chapter 8
Not really a fan of bestiality. Also, the giant cat must have been very small to do that to Jack given how his size has been described. Now, the two giant girls treat their chosen hero like this presents the opportunity for some drama. Since Jack is a normal human, treating him like this should definitely have consequences, not just for the giantesses but also for Jack's well being. Plus, after that abuse, there's no reason for him to help break their curse.
There could be opportunity for some gentle interaction now since Jack needs help.
Author's Response:
There might be gentle interactions in the future...who knows? Not really a fan of bestiality myself, I guess I was a bit affected by ''THE SINNVERSE", Jay the red panda's universe where gigantic futa furries use and abuse human and furry males. There will be no similar content in this story in the future. Plus, I wanted to use the line "Let Miss Whiskers show how much she loves you" and the beast proceed and violate Jack, that's why the whole graphic content thing. As for Jack's health, he is brutally traumatized but he is alive, as mentioned in the story.
Other than that, thanks for the feedback.
[Report This]Date: May 31 2022 1:46 AM Title: Chapter 8
Well I didn't like Miss Whiskers! Not just that I wasn't expecting a futa story to cross over into bestiality. It's a matter of size. A cat is just too big. Even a horny hamster would be too big. Futa mouse would have been more appropriate. But, it still doesn't seem to fit. I think you would have been better off without it.
Thanks for the reference to the futa sisters story over on writing.com (never would have found that motherlode of futa content). There's enough material for many more beanstalk chapters.
However, here's what I would have liked to see you do (instead of Miss Whiskers) if the objective was to get Jack Futa Fucked. He needs to get a girl pregnant to lift the curse. Maybe he'll succeed with the queen. But, I'm sure she'll want to hedge her bets. The queen should command that great witch you introduced to shrink one of her subjects down down to Jack's size so he can "breed" her. Preferably a criminal who isn't too keen on the idea. Another adversary (or maybe later an ally) for JackAuthor's Response:
Now that you mention it, I believe you're right. A cat may be too big, wrong animal choice there. I guess my calculations were wrong from the beginning. I wanted a toe sized Jack to deal with an animal a couple times his size but then the cat would look really small compared to the actual giants, hence the 40 foot furball Miss Whiskers. But anyways, it is what it is...sorry if it was a major turn off.
Date: May 30 2022 4:23 PM Title: Chapter 8
I really enjoyed your article and can't wait for the next chapter