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Reviewer: Kamaeli Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 25 2023 11:20 PM Title: Chapter 21 - Trust Your Friends

Solid last few chapters! You got me real hyped for the next ones with Ginny and her "whatever you want" guidance, kind of hoping she goes overboard lol, but I guess we'll see what she has in mind.. and of course I'm still wondering what Rasha will really be like once we get to know her.

I really like direction Kristen and Ginny have been going, regarding the micros/and nanos less and less as the story goes on; it's been rewarding seeing them go from cautious and careful and even caring for them to seeing them as insignificant lesser beings that exist just for their own wants and needs. They've tried to be kind and considerate, but have been let down and disrespected too many times to let it slide.

Side note, I like the parts of your tiny POV sections thar highlight the random individuals amd families across the land that have nothing to do with the politics and their whole situation yet are just the same forced to helplessly endure and try to ignore the acts going on above and around them.


Once again, looking forward to seeing the return of "Giant Monster Ginny" and what she has in store. Keep it up!! (And Merry Christmas!)



Author's Response:

Thank you!  Yeah, Ginny could absolutely go overboard, I'm just not sure how much yet lol.  Rasha will come and go I think until I think I can find a better way to introduce her to the world.  I think there's something really fun that I write with her, she has the potential to be a unique character. 

I think that was always to be the natural progression with Kristen especially, just more and more uncaring as they get more and more used to their absolute power without being challenged.  Personal challenges are really the only thing now that can sway someone one way or the other. 

Noted, I'll consider more random tiny POVs across the cities and country just as little fun side stories. 

Thank you for all your comments and reviews and support!

Reviewer: Giantess Nation Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 16 2023 7:58 AM Title: Chapter 21 - Trust Your Friends

Well, this one ended on a cliffhanger. I have to say I'm still disappointed the conversation between Justyna and Kristen never happened... well, I guess it did, but it was never covered in the story. Oh well.

But I am very interested to see where this is headed. I just hope that there will be something left of Ostrov and the cities by the time Kristen gets back from vacation. :) I like some amount of destruction, I just like it to be at a sustainable level and not like genocidal.

Though I'm sure millions will be dead by the time Ginny is done with playing with it and "helping" Justyna out in her civil war thing. Justyna can call Kristen and Kristen can pass any messages on to Ginny, but maybe Justyna could just somehow communicate to Ginny directly through her laptop somehow? I dunno.

The civil war creates an interesting situation where the mass destruction Ginny is certainly going to do is justified... sorta. It will be interesting to see how that plays out. You wrote that she wiped out her own supply of tinies that she had living in her bathroom, so she'll need to stock up on more of them. Why not have her stock up on some nanos and have them living in her bathroom also? She could only really collect them up on an individual basis if she employed the help of the Micros to do that, but she could just scoop up an entire nano city wholesale and take that off home with her.

So instead of (or in addition to) having micros living in her medicine cabinet, she could also have nano cities inside her medicine cabinet also. The interactions possible would definitely be very different, but there is some very interesting potential there. You could introduce new characters who are mayors of these cities, and perhaps somehow they are able to call her up and communicate with her like Justyna does with Kristen.

She could put those nano cities to work doing things like cleaning her toothbrush or various things like that... or she could place a nano city on her bike seat when she works out just like she did with the micros... with far greater potential for casualties if she plops her butt down.... stuff like that.

Also, here's an interesting thought... the Micros she had taken previously were all volunteers. But because of this civil war thing, Ginny could snatch and take home rebel cities that fight against Justyna and so they would be anything but volunteers, but this would be a way to punish them. She could put the cities inside her panty liner, inside of her shoes, in the toilet, etc. Not because they're devout fanatics who volunteered for it, but because they are rebels who rose up against her friend Justyna and this is their punishment. Of course, even within "rebel" cities there would unfortunately happen to be a lot of innocents who were just there, but those are the breaks when you're tiny.



Author's Response:

I think I just have a much better conversation between Kristen and Justyna planned for later so I've been saving it. 

Nothing is genocidal until it is.  Ostrov is a massive, massive country with hundreds of millions of people, it would actually take a lot of effort from one of the giants to really get rid of too many all in one go. 

Yeah, we'll see what Ginny does, I think she doesn't do it for her people, she just always wanted to have gratification and attention she never got as a child and young adult. 

Reviewer: sp180 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 14 2023 7:35 PM Title: Chapter 21 - Trust Your Friends

Great set up between Ginny and the Nanos. I can't wait to see what fun Ginny is going to have between herself, the Nanos, and her bag of toys



Author's Response:

I think it's gonna be pretty sultry!

Reviewer: LittleBigPlanet Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 14 2023 4:55 AM Title: Chapter 21 - Trust Your Friends

Nice Chapter.😋 It's fun to see a change with Ginny when left all by herself with the micro cities instead of Kristen 



Author's Response:

Yeah, she was actually pretty nice, huh?  Paint my nails and give them a little snack for doing a good job... or is that all she has planned?

Reviewer: GiantessLover21 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 13 2023 12:36 AM Title: Chapter 21 - Trust Your Friends

Perfect nothing else to say.

Author's Response:

And your reviews are always so nice!  Thank you lol

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