Reviewer: Giantess Nation Signed [Report This]
Date: October 31 2023 11:21 AM Title: Chapter 20 - The Birthday Girl

I apologize if the lengthy reviews I left annoyed you. I see you've responded to others, but not mine, and I'll assume that's the reason. So I'll try to keep it more brief this time.

The only negative thing I have to say is that the story seems to have skipped forward in time beyond the conversation Kristen was going to have with Justyna about the destruction she and Ginny caused a couple chapters back. Since Justyna was able to text her about Rasha getting into the room I'll take it as an indication their conversation went well since they're still on speaking terms, but I am disappointed the story skipped forward past.

With that out of the way, the chapter was otherwise great. Since Rasha's introduction into the story several chapters back, I hoped that she would get into the rooms (the Nano room specifically) one way or another, and this chapter did not disappoint. :) I'm very much interested in how things proceed from here.

I have to say, I saw it coming too. When you wrote about how Kristen placed the keys in the jewelry box before going to the party instead of taking them with her while Rasha and Madelyn played hide and seek, I just knew that was going to be a Chekhov's Gun. :)

Rasha's snooping would have been so easy to avert if Kristen had just taken those damn keys with her to the party. But of course, we WANT Rasha to snoop. The only other way would have been if she would have like picked the locks or went in through the window or something, and Rasha is too nice of a girl to do that sort of thing, so I guess it HAD to be this way.

Anyway, like I said I don't want to make this be too long and bother you, but I would like to show you a couple images I AI generated that were inspired by the events in this chapter:

https://www.deviantart.com/giantess-nation/art/Rasha-Discovers-Ostrov-991469102

https://www.deviantart.com/giantess-nation/art/Rasha-Steps-Into-Ostrov-991475090

I posted links on them to this story, so I hope that helps you get a bit more traffic and exposure. I also hope you don't mind that I've done that, but if its a problem I'll delete them if you want. As I explained in the descriptions, they're not as good as I'd have liked, but its the best I could get the AI to do.

Author's Response:

I don't mind the AI art, and I know it's difficult to get everything right, all I know is that Rasha would be much bigger and probably have one less toe lol, but awesome idea!

Reviewer: GiantessLover21 Signed [Report This]
Date: October 12 2023 11:44 PM Title: Chapter 20 - The Birthday Girl

Perfect as always 

Author's Response:

Thank you, perfect is high praise.