I recently discovered this story, and just finished reading through all of it. I'll give you my overall thoughts on the story as a whole and some ideas and suggestions that have come to my mind, but I decided to leave my review under this chapter specifically because of the part regarding Nyla, which I'll get to later.

First of all, I want to applaud you for the slow-rolling and plausible descent of Kristen into madness (or power-lust). Your story is a very welcome and refreshing change from the vast majority of stories out there, where the woman is always invariably turned on by destruction and killing right off the start. It is so very much over done, and feels very contrived, yet most giantess stories are like that, and frankly it gets a bit tiresome and boring. But the way you wrote Kristen being depressed and horrified that she had killed so many people (even if on accident) was on point. You had her gradually evolve and ease into embracing her dominance over the tiny people, and it was well done, so I applaud you on that.

Now for a bit of constructive criticism, though. You wrote that eventually Kristen began bringing food and water to the micros, and this works out well and good to explain how they get their food, but if I am recalling correctly, it took some months before Kristen started doing this. So how were these cities able to survive for those months without food or water? For Ostrov it kinda made some sense, because it was not only their cities but also the farmlands of the entire country that was brought with them. Cities can't supply their own food and need to have it brought in. A city might have enough food to last a few days or weeks at most, but certainly not months.

Now, as for Nyla and why I am posting the review on this chapter specifically. I'm NGL, I was kinda looking forward to seeing Kristen do something to punish this tiny woman for the threats she made to her daughter. It felt anti-climatic that she was not only allowed to survive (when so many others had died for so much less), but even ended up being rewarded by given such a powerful position and a life of luxury. I guess you could consider this a complaint, but I was bit disappointed she didn't get what she deserved for the threats she made.

That said, I do enjoy the humiliation she is subjecting the city to in forcing them to clean the filth from her shoes. Please do not hesitate to go into as much detail as you can when it comes to these humiliating and degrading jobs Braithe is now being forced to do.

Now, if you are receptive to ideas and suggestions, this chapter mentioned the black tar filth stuff that the workers cleaned from Kristen's sandals and made up of her skin, oil, dirt, sweat, etc. What exactly do they do with this stuff after they clean it off? It has to be discarded somehow, but where and how? My idea, if you're interested, is that someone in Braithe (maybe Nyla herself?) comes up with creative uses for Kristen's foot filth. Maybe it can be turned into compost and used to create some arable land for farming like Ostrov does? Not that they need to, since Kristen now provides them with food, but maybe they want to have a little more variety in their diet or something by growing crops native to their world which Kristen can't provide? Otherwise, maybe the foot gunk could be refined down into industrial chemicals like fuel or lubricants or something? The oil from Kristen's feet is oil, after all, so maybe it can be used to power and lubricate the very machinery they use to clean her shoes? Maybe they are able to collect Kristen's foot oil to such an amount that they can use it to power their vehicles or export it to other cities in the room for them to use? Or maybe if they don't think its too disgusting they might even eat Kristen's foot gunk or dried skin cells as a delicacy? Or use it has building materials somehow? Maybe in place of concrete and steel, they can use Kristen's skin cells as building blocks? The city of Crest might want Kristen's foot oil to use as annointing oils or incense or something in their temples when they do their rituals in worship of her. So please consider my idea that the city of Crest might really want to import this stuff Braithe is extracting from Kristen's shoes as a waste product.

Also, have you considered having Kristen put the nation of Ostrov to work for her in some similar fashion? The thought of even tinier people being put to work to clean Kristen's intimate objects is very hot. Its hot when that entire cities are doing this, but an entire nation which is even smaller? Wow. It doesn't necessarily just have to be her footwear, like what about making them clean her dirty panties, or even her vibrator? Butt plug? ;) Maybe the nanos of Ostrov can find some legit uses for the filth like I suggested with Braithe? Just some ideas, of course. But I do understand that Kristen is on great terms with Justyna, so I'm not sure what would prompt her to impose such a punishment on these hapless nanos. I just know that I would love to see such a punishment be imposed. ;)

And what about Ginny? Surely her footwear (and other intimate items) could use some TLC too, right?

Oh! And that's another thing which reminds me. When you wrote about Ginny taking the cap of tinies home with her, it made me think: what if Ginny had used those tinies as colonists to found a new city of her own inside of her own home? Having a cap full of thousands would have been a great starter population. Don't get me wrong, it was great she enjoyed herself with them, but she could have used just some of them and kept the rest to replenish their numbers so she could continue to enjoy them over the long run.

BTW, that's another thing.... whether intentionally or not, Kristen, Ginny, Leslie, etc. are taking a HUGE toll on the population of these people. I don't know what your long term plans are for this story, but if Kirsten is to maintain her role of goddess for a long time to come and if she isn't being much more sparing in their lives than she is, then she's going to run out. These people are reproducing and regenerating their populations right? I could see them being so demoralized by their situation that they don't reproduce much, but assuming they do it is still a long time for new micros to be born and grow to adulthood. Unless the tinies have some sort of accelerated growth that comes from the shrinking or something?

Oh, and btw what about actual literal bugs and stuff? Every house has them. if, say, a spider got into one of those rooms it could be a disaster, right? Maybe just possible the militaries of the Micro cities might be capable of killing a spider though. I know they can't do anything more than tickle Kristen.

And as for the crack in the wall... here's another idea I'd like to toss out to you. What if the Micros dug through the wall into the adjacent room with the Nanos and were able to interact with them or something? I mean there's LOTS of potential to this idea. Or Kristen might even purposely arrange for the Micros to interact with the Nanos somehow? For example, in the last chapter where someone had tried to assassinate Justyna, Kristen understandably wants to do something to help her friend out, but given her enormous size its impossible for her to do anything with the precision necessary. But a Micro on the other hand could make for a great intermediary, right? Kristen could deploy a Micro (or team of them) into Ostrov and order them to assist Justyna or something.

Before I forget, here's one final thought about Kristen putting the Micros (and maybe Nanos) to work for her. Making them clean her items is very cool and intoxicating, but what if she could put them to work in a way that was profitable to her somehow? Being so tiny, they can do extremely intricate and detailed work that normal sized people can't. Maybe Kristen could make herself rich in the real world by putting these people to work making something that she could sell for profit?

I don't know, anyway this is your story and I don't mean to impose or anything but I just wanted to share these ideas that popped into my mind as I was reading it.

It's a great story, and I look forward to your future updates!

This is a very interesting addition! Looking forward to the Nano POV

Author's Response:

It's finally coming next chapter, then they will be a good part of the story.