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Reviewer: titantonic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 27 2023 2:22 AM Title: Chapter 14 - Stress Test

This is great! I can't wait for more... your writing is so good.

Author's Response:

Thank you, titantonic!  I hope you keep enjoying

Reviewer: carnage Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 23 2023 2:56 AM Title: Chapter 14 - Stress Test

I was just dying for another chapter and I was so happy to see one added today. Great work as usual. I love your writing style; like I've told you before, it's something I'm quite jealous of! (Wiggling her toes over the skyline, such a simple but impactful visual. Sliding her foot back and making the squeaking sound, it all just sounds so real.)

On to the story. As I was reading this, I was thinking 'wow, Kirsten's really starting to become less and less worried about them, isn't she?' Almost indifferent. Which is my favorite giantess personality. But then at the end when she almost took out Braithe, holy crap. I loved how she tried rationalizing it and justifying it in her mind.  Man, my heart was racing with excitement as her foot came down over it. I simultaneously wanted her to do it and NOT do it at the same time. But then the crowning moment for me was when Kristen told them to clean her sandals instead. Such a power move on her part and a humiliation to the little city.  

Awesome work, great chapter. Please keep continuing this. I can see this being as epic as Grove View. I'm anxiously awaiting the next chapter already.



Author's Response:

Thank you, carnage! Your writing style is quite amazing so I appreciate your feedback whenever I get it.  I'm trying to write this story more realistic than I did with Grove View, a lot of people want to focus on the fetish stuff. I want to focus on the character first, the rest will come later as a happy consequence.

I think the indifference is what's going to be the catalyst for her accepting her new role,I think part of her is starting to like the power too, even if it was brought on by a shitty date and a bit of alcohol, in a way, it might serve as a tool for more control over her own life, go figure. 

Reviewer: sp180 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 22 2023 4:31 PM Title: Chapter 14 - Stress Test

Amazing. I like how this chapter sets up a fun time for Ginny and a potential stepping stone for how Kristen will develop more ways to interact with the micros, and arguably with the nanos, too



Author's Response:

These last two chapters are pretty big stepping stones from Kristen becoming use to her new role in life.

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