Reviewer: GiantessLover21 Signed [Report This]
Date: April 26 2024 12:27 AM Title: Chapter 1 - The Suburban Mom

Perfect as always. the wait is amply rewarded by the quality of every chapter 

Reviewer: Zaximus Signed [Report This]
Date: February 22 2024 9:40 AM Title: Chapter 23 - Interlude III

Should have stopped by with the last Interlude/all multi tiny perspective chapter but c'est la vie.

Anyways, wanted to voice that I love these tiny perspective chapters (and tiny perspectives in general) and would love to see more of this in the future. Very much enjoying this and excited every new chapter I see uploaded.

Author's Response:

I'll always tell my audience that writing the tiny perspective is always the hardest for me, but I'm going to keep trying my best to write them!  Thank you for stopping by!

Reviewer: Giantess Nation Signed [Report This]
Date: February 19 2024 12:22 AM Title: Chapter 23 - Interlude III

The length of the chapters isn't too long, and I think it is a good thing to be honest. The longer the chapter, the more it helps with the long wait in-between chapters. Don't worry about it. Go ahead and write them even longer if you want. If there is anyone that has a problem with too much text then they probably wouldn't have stuck around for all these 23 chapters anyway. Those of us who have stuck around obviously are fine with it, and those who aren't fine with it aren't even here reading it anyway, so don't worry about them.

That said, this was a great chapter for world building and character development, but it of course didn't top the previous one in terms of action and the sexual stuff. When it comes to that sort of thing, I think that last chapter was the peak of the story thus far. :)

I'm glad to see the story focusing more on the nano perspective in these latest chapters. The micro stuff was always good too, but nano content is just so rare, you know? That said, this chapter made me realize that the differences in size between the Micros and Nanos isn't as extreme as I had previously thought it was. I always knew the Micros were smaller than ants, but when you wrote of that tiny red ant being HUNDREDS of feet tall in comparison to them, it really put it into perspective how small the micros truly are. But if they're so small that even a tiny red ant is hundreds of feet tall compared to them, then would Kristen, Ginny, Rasha, and so on really even be able to see them with the naked eye? They'd be like, I dunno, motes of dust or something. The Nanos of course are even tinier still, but it seems that with an ant being hundreds of feet talle, even the micros themselves would be at the limit of what could be observed with the naked eye. And the Nanos of course are way past that.

Yet, the difference between them isn't as extreme as I had been thinking. I don't know why, but I had it in my mind this entire time that the Micros were as large relative to the Nanos as Kristen and the others are to them. But this chapter with the ant and Parker being placed in Ostrov and the nanos being half an inch to her (which is still small, but nowhere near the difference as Kristen is to the Micros) proved that isn't the case.

The insect attack was something I had suggested months ago, and I appreciate that you've included this as well as some other things I had suggested. I'm really happy to see you've reconsidered your earlier stance of not wanting the Nanos and Micros to interact with each other, which you said you didn't want to do again after you had done something like that in your previous story. The idea of one or more of the Micros like Parker entering Ostrov and serving as Justyna's enforcer on behalf of Kristen was something I had thought about some chapters back, and I'm glad to see it happen, and excited to see where it develops. There is a LOT of potential there.

That said, perhaps its for the best that the difference between Micro and Nano isn't that extreme after all, because this means that Parker won't be causing too much inadvertent death and destruction, yet at the same time she's a nigh unstoppable force, which only possibly the heaviest weapons could potentially harm or kill. A LOT of Nano nukes could maybe kill Kristen or whomever, but for a Micro like Parker it is certain they could, and in her case it would probably only take a single one. Maybe even conventional bombs with a high enough explosive yield could also do her in, or at least hurt her. But whether the rebels have access to stuff like that or not is for you to decide.

The part about the plane escaping (or attempting to escape) from the Micro room makes me think it might be an interesting idea to explore something like that for the Nanos too. Obviously a trek on foot or even by land vehicles for a Nano to explore other rooms in the house would probably take months or maybe even years, and the logistics would be hard if not impossible to pull off, but when it comes to planes which can move at hypersonic speeds, well I dunno. Now that you have a Micro introduced into the Nano room, it could be an interesting idea to have some of the Nanos make there way into the Micro room for some reason or other.

Like I wrote in the last review I wrote, the plot in the previous chapter with the fighting over Ostrov's nukes made me think of Nyla and her desire to get revenge against Kristen. Well, the rebels in Ostrov also share that same desire, so they could strike up some sort of alliance with Nyla to give her nukes or something. I dunno. But since it looks like Parker is going to start laying the hurt down on the rebels, they might want to flee from Ostrov if they can manage it, and maybe a plane is the way they could do that. Maybe Nyla could give them asylum in Braithe. Maybe in exchange for them becoming her sex toys or something, since she no longer has her boy toy. ;) Nyla's dream of becoming a powerful giant herself could be fulfilled this way. They're so small that she could hide the whole plane and all its occupants in her office or something, and Kristen wouldn't necessarily ever even know about it. Just an idea to consider...

The sort of plane which Ostrov might have which might be able to make the journey into the micro room would probably be a strategic bomber plane, like the B-52 or the Russian Tu-60 or something equivalent to those. Those planes are meant to be in the air for long periods of time in case a nuclear war breaks out and then they can react at a moment's notice, so they carry a lot of fuel. So maybe they could make that journey.

Yet as large as these planes are, since they're nano scale they'd be much smaller than the plane that Ginny detected in this chapter. So it should easily be able to escape detection. As long as the doors to both rooms are open for long enough and no giant is in their path that would collide into, then they probably could make the journey. Aside from going to the Micro room, they could also go to some other room, but I can't think of a good rationale for them doing so. Since we know that both the Micros and Nanos are able to transmit messages to Kristen, isn't it reasonable that they're also able to transmit messages between each other too? The Micros and Nanos have probably been transmitting messages back and forth to each other all these years. So why not have it that Nyla has been in secret contact with these rebels or something? If Nyla can manage to get some of these Nano rebels into her city and under her control, then she could use them for clandestine purposes as spies or something she could send into other rival cities to get information or stuff like that. She could also put them to work cleaning her own shoes, since she's probably tired of being the director of the cleaning of Kristen's shoes, and maybe would like to have that sort of thing for herself for a change.

Or perhaps you could just have Nyla (or some other dissident Micro) get into the Nano room herself somehow, and wreck havoc on Ostrov, or perhaps do battle with Parker and give the rebels some sort of counterbalance or something to even things out. Its up to you but its an idea. :)

I loved the part about how something as inconsequential as a mere strand of Ginny's cum nearly caused Justyna's death by burying her hundreds of feet below that substance which hardened into something like concrete, and how the nanos struggled to make their way through, and it was too much for them and Justyna would have died if it wasn't for Parker's help. Its amazing when something as seemingly insignificant as a strand of cum can be so destructive... :)

Yet at the same time, as you wrote it was hard like stone when it dried, so what if the Nanos were to mine that dried out cum strand of Ginny's and used it for various purposes? There's a lot of things which they might do with it, but my main thought is they could quarry it out into "stone" blocks and then use it as a building material or something. If they're going to start worshiping Ginny as a literal goddess, then wouldn't it be great if they constructed some sort of magnificent temple dedicated to her which is built out of "stone" blocks of her dried cum? There is so much destruction going on, so the construction of that cum temple would be just a little bit of the opposite. And Ginny would probably get a real kick out of a massive temple constructed out of her cum. It could be built in some special safe area, which the giants would take extra care never to disturb. It could be like one of the Great Wonders of their world or something. ;) Imagine the smell the nanos would experience when they entered into that cum temple to worship the goddess who delivered that cum. That said, the same could also be true with the breast milk which Kristen squirted on them years earlier. I'm sure that dried out into a similar hard white material they could build with or something. Maybe even eat as food or something. A temple dedicated to Kristen, constructed from "stone" blocks quarried from her dried breast milk would be very fitting, and maybe its something women of Ostrov might eat as some sort of religious rite, thinking that it may increase their fertility or something like that. As the story progresses towards the development of this cult religion and eventually the introduction of Madelyn, it makes sense to me that the same breast milk the nourished her as an infant would take on some very special significance, and there is a LOT of it, in a dried form, that the Ostrovians would never deplete even in a thousand years.

Even putting religion aside, I'm certain that even from a rational scientific perspective, there would be a good reason to want to eat that dried breast milk since it has a lot of nutrients in it, because that's the whole point of breast milk, after all. And yes it brought death and detruction when it squirted out onto them years ago, but there's also some good to it and it can create and bring life too. I'd say its probably better than the vegan stuff Ginny feeds them, in any case. :)

Reviewer: J - Vader Signed [Report This]
Date: February 18 2024 3:57 PM Title: Chapter 23 - Interlude III

Okay, this chapter was so good the POVs from the characters, the development, and the tone of the situation were great. I love that Kristen is trying to be a better leader after Justyan's close death and do better by her people now really adds to her being a complicated character with flaws but is trying to be better which I love. Ginny was great I like how she saved the city from an ant and avoided doing too much damage and Parker saving the day was also great. The Luka part was also probably my favoirt POV in this chapter how he could and will die from Ginny passing gas since he was stuck in her colen was great to the point I actually wanted to see that happen but hey maybe another time lol. Also, no the long chapters aren’t annoying their freaking great IMO overall great chapter.

Author's Response:

Thank you!   I was worried this chapter was going to be too much going on and too long lol.  Yeah, I really want to develop Kristen, I want to make her feel like a real person, she's going to struggle with her problems, make bad decision with her people, have fun with them, probably still kill to many of them in careless ways... Yeah, the Luka part, I kinda wanted readers to use their imagination about how he dies inside of Ginny since I don't really like writing gas or scat stuff specifically. 

Reviewer: stegosaurus Signed [Report This]
Date: January 19 2024 10:04 PM Title: Chapter 1 - The Suburban Mom

This is the best ongoing story currently published on this site. Thank you for the consistent updates. It's always a thrill to see a new chapter posted.

You have a knack for writing power dynamics. Anyone can throw adjectives together and describe a size scene, but few in this genre have the ability to make readers feel invested in characters like you do.

In case you like reader suggestions, here are a few:

• More development of the cult worshiping the giant women
• Scenes from the nanos' perspective describing life around the giant women
• Nanos try to escape the room, explore the house

Author's Response:

Thank you!  I'm always thrilled to hear such high praise.  I hope to continue to make readers feel invested in my characters.  Welcome suggestions.  I will say that I have more cult and nano stuff coming up and I hope to develop more personal stories in the upcoming shift in the story. 

Reviewer: Giantess Nation Signed [Report This]
Date: January 17 2024 12:29 PM Title: Chapter 22 - Adult Supervision

This was one of the best chapters so far, and also one of the longest too (which is a great combination lol). Were it not for the nudity and the gratuitous sexual content, the violence and destruction of the battle and the giant Ginny monster would have made for a great action flick or giant-monster horror flick (or whatever genre this could rightly be classified as). If only we could convince hollywood to produce such a film, then that would be a pretty awesome thing to see. If such a movie ever were to be made, then I'd nominate Jeannie Mai https://www.instagram.com/thejeanniemai to star in the roll as the Ginny monster (her real name is even kinda similar). Whenever I read this story, I always think of her whenever imagining what Ginny looks like.

That said, it was cool that you wrote how Ginny's appearance is completely alien to the people of Ostrov because Asians or people like Asians don't exist on their home world. I know you'd written similarly in one of the earlier chapters about some of the micros, when she ate them on the banana. The cool thing about her exotic appearance being completely alien to them is that it synergizes very well with the whole giant monster thing. :) Having your cities attacked, devoured, fucked, etc. by a giant woman that seems familiar to you is one thing, but Ginny being something they've never seen before takes it to a whole other level. It probably causes them to be more intimidated and terrified of her. This same thing could also be true in the case of Rasha also, in any hypothetical future interactions they have... though she already did interact with them by stepping on them (though you didn't write an account of this from their perspective, but I wonder what they made of her appearance and whether it was exotic to them like with Ginny, etc.)

Speaking of Rasha, you may have something already in mind and if so don't let me interrupt you with that, but if you need a suggestion on where to take things with her character, I was thinking that she has probably been thinking it all over and might be connecting the dots on what is going on. Obviously she saw Ostrov (and stepped on it), but in addition to that, she also stepped on those weird "bugs" before that. Either one of those on their own is weird in itself, but both these things plus Kristen's strict secrecy regarding those rooms are things that might be running through her head and maybe she'll either figure it out based off just that, or its something that will eat at her and she'll need to find out and either snoop some more or confront Kristen about it... or maybe Kristen will confront her about having snooped (and lying about it).

Plus I see you now have Janelle peering into the windows also, so it doesn't look like things are boding well for the tinies... more and more people are becoming more and more aware of things and that's more and more potential people to cause destruction, so that's not a good thing... for them, but maybe it is good for the readers. :)

In regards to criticism of this chapter, the only thing I really felt was off was Ginny's ability to see the Ostrovian military as "particles". My math could be off, but I remember trying to calculate how small they would be in relation to her (and Kristen) when she is 200 miles tall, and the best I could figure out is that they would be roughly on par with the size of Bacteria, and even a human's skin cells would dwarf them. So I think that's a good rule of thumb to consider when writing them, because a naked human eye can't see something like a bacteria, not as dots, and not even as particles like the chapter says. Of course this isn't including larger things they have like military vehicles, tanks, etc. Those are good deal larger than a human so maybe those things would be perceptible as "particles" to her. If that's what you mean then I retract my criticism there.

That said, under a microscope they absolutely would be observable to her. If she could get them onto a slide then I think she could see certainly see them. But not with the naked eye is all.

That being said, all those "particles" being stuck to her dildo and then going inside of her ass was very hot. :) Just like you wrote from the perspective of Rev and the city she devoured, I'm sure that many of those "particles" are still alive, albeit lost somewhere deep inside of her ass. Its just a shame you hadn't written it from their perspective, but perhaps in the next chapter or something? ;)

Anyway, if I understand things correctly, this was an excellent juxtaposition here. Ostrov being the most powerful, respected, and perhaps feared nation on its planet, and having this powerful and respected military being defeated by a this woman's dildo, getting stuck to it, and then being plunged deep inside of her rectum... where presumably many of them still remain and are trapped. Yes, that is a very powerful juxtaposition indeed. I hope that isn't overlooked in the next chapter. :)

The idea of the nanos surviving on (or inside) of Ginny's body was something I've been thinking of since several chapters back when she squished that city (and several others) with her stinky nylon-clad feet. While many surely ended up dead, the advantage they have in being as tiny as they are is that it gives them some ability to evade being squished and killed to some extent. So I think it is safe to say there were many survivors that just got caught up in the fibers of those nylons to face an unknown fate... probably lasting until drowning when she put those nylons in the washer... or something like that.

The account you gave from Rev's perspective was good, and potentially he could last a good while in there. They're so tiny that even brushing her teeth might not clear them out, but if Ginny rinses her mouth with mouthwash then that would wipe them out for sure. I will say it was kinda sad that Rev won't be able to accomplish his goal of getting to work in that city... :(

Anyway, now that much or most (all?) of the Rebel military forces have been defeated and imprisoned inside of Ginny's rectum, and the dildo which sent them there has been planted into the ground to tower over the landscape like a monolith, I reckon there will probably be some fanatics coming to worship that just as there were with Kristen's heels. There's undoubtedly many people still stuck to the juices on it so that would be a major rescue operation to try to save them... but if they're rebels then maybe Justyna would just prefer to leave them rot there. Besides, the priority of the rescue forces should be to save her, right? :)

Very interesting to see where things will develop from here. Part of me kinda hopes that not all of the rebels were defeated by Ginny's dildo, so that the fighting isn't entirely over yet, and that way there can be more shenanigans in the next chapter too... but that of course is up to you.

Oh! One final thought about the nukes. Like you had written, they might have a hard time to kill the giants with them, but if they have a LOT of them and concentrate them, then maybe its possible they could kill Kristen, Ginny, or whoever. But if only just one or a few hit then it would probably just cause a bad blister or burn on the skin or something. The worst thing would be to target the eyes, as that would be the most vulnerable part.

Anyway, I remember way way way back in one of the earliest chapters of the story when that female mayor (whose name I can't recall at the moment) threatened to kill Madelyn (when she was a baby) and that of course naturally pissed Kristen off. This chapter with the stuff about the nukes sorta reminds me about that. If that female mayor still holds a grudge after all these years then she might want to acquire those nukes somehow. Even though those nukes are nano scale, the cities I presume don't have any nukes at all, so it seems like something she'd want to get in order to get her revenge. But I completely understand if you don't want the nanos and micros to interact, but that was just something that came to mind.

Anyway, this was a great chapter! I look forward to seeing how things unfold in the next.

Author's Response:

Thank you GN, I'm glad you think this was one of the best chapters!  Yeah, Ginny's appearance is Alien to most of the country and cities, and I hope to explore more of that later when I get to more of the perspectives from her followers which I plan to flush out later.  Same thing could happen with Rasha, I haven't really gotten to that yet. 

We'll see where things go from here, I always appreciate your analysis and suggestions and they do help me plan on where to take things. 

Reviewer: carnage Signed [Report This]
Date: January 12 2024 11:50 AM Title: Chapter 22 - Adult Supervision

Finally caught up on this story, and as usual, it's fantastic. This chapter was so good. The part in Ginny's mouth, amazing. The part where her cum is drowning and crushing the city, unbelievable. Keep it up man. Two great stories going on right now.

Author's Response:

Lol thanks for catching up, I know it's a lot.  I really appreciate the compliments from you!

Reviewer: Kamaeli Signed [Report This]
Date: December 25 2023 11:20 PM Title: Chapter 21 - Trust Your Friends

Solid last few chapters! You got me real hyped for the next ones with Ginny and her "whatever you want" guidance, kind of hoping she goes overboard lol, but I guess we'll see what she has in mind.. and of course I'm still wondering what Rasha will really be like once we get to know her.

I really like direction Kristen and Ginny have been going, regarding the micros/and nanos less and less as the story goes on; it's been rewarding seeing them go from cautious and careful and even caring for them to seeing them as insignificant lesser beings that exist just for their own wants and needs. They've tried to be kind and considerate, but have been let down and disrespected too many times to let it slide.

Side note, I like the parts of your tiny POV sections thar highlight the random individuals amd families across the land that have nothing to do with the politics and their whole situation yet are just the same forced to helplessly endure and try to ignore the acts going on above and around them.

Once again, looking forward to seeing the return of "Giant Monster Ginny" and what she has in store. Keep it up!! (And Merry Christmas!)

Author's Response:

Thank you!  Yeah, Ginny could absolutely go overboard, I'm just not sure how much yet lol.  Rasha will come and go I think until I think I can find a better way to introduce her to the world.  I think there's something really fun that I write with her, she has the potential to be a unique character. 

I think that was always to be the natural progression with Kristen especially, just more and more uncaring as they get more and more used to their absolute power without being challenged.  Personal challenges are really the only thing now that can sway someone one way or the other. 

Noted, I'll consider more random tiny POVs across the cities and country just as little fun side stories. 

Thank you for all your comments and reviews and support!

Reviewer: sp180 Signed [Report This]
Date: December 14 2023 7:35 PM Title: Chapter 21 - Trust Your Friends

Great set up between Ginny and the Nanos. I can't wait to see what fun Ginny is going to have between herself, the Nanos, and her bag of toys

Author's Response:

I think it's gonna be pretty sultry!

Reviewer: GiantessLover21 Signed [Report This]
Date: December 13 2023 12:36 AM Title: Chapter 21 - Trust Your Friends

Perfect nothing else to say.

Author's Response:

And your reviews are always so nice!  Thank you lol