Given the fact that this story has reached the top 10 longest stories list on the site now I am curious as to how much left is there to go (if you have planned out the rest of the story up to its ending) :)

Things are starting to heat up! You’ve really stepped up the creativity in terms of the characters and micro cities, both of which have evolved so much since the story began. The all-men and all-women cities can be interesting places to explore over time and I like how Ostrov was both literally and ideologically split in two by Kristen’s destructive actions.

While Kristen has been exceptionally cruel towards her people at times, I like how you’ve teased introducing even more destructive giantesses into the story, like Nina and Valerie, not to mention what Ginny and Janelle have planned together.

The reveal with Justyna was a real gut punch. It was something I didn’t expect, but the perfect direction to take her story. I’m team Justyna all the way, though realistically, I don’t see how someone that small could ever hope to stand up against Kristen, even with the most advanced military weaponry. Can Ostrov, Justyna and her child truly be saved? 

Of all the characters, Cameron and Parker are definitely the most relatable. They seem like the closest thing to heroes in the story (disregarding Parker’s actions in Ostrov of course). However, given her obsession with Kristen and new rule over Crest, Parker may end up becoming the next Anton. I’m excited to see how Cameron and Parker’s relationship develops.

I’m usually not one to offer suggestions, but if there’s one interaction that I’d like to see from The Incident series that hasn’t been done before, it’s nanos being smuggled into the micro cities. I’m sure women like Nyla, Samantha or even Parker could make good use of them :)

Your commitment to writing despite facing health challenges is really inspiring. Wishing you luck on your recovery!

I am so fascinating in these new stories, could you please make more session like urine or fart parts?

Author's Response:

Thank you and maybe lol

So happy to see an update on this story. I'm sorry for your hope you gonna get better soon. And as always i can't wait to read the next chapter

Wow! This chapter was really full of some great moments! But ESPECIALLY the very last scene. I think I’ve said it before but I’ll say it again, I really really really love when Kristen exerts her power over the cities, especially when it’s for petty reasons like there at the end. As well as the voting for the party/holiday scene in this chapter as well. Definitely continues to be one of my favorite stories and I’m always awaiting for the next chapter!

I've been following this story for some time and I must say, it's so well written. I absolutely despise Kristen and if she ever gets what she deserves, I know it'll be an extremely cathartic chapter. Justyna is my favorite, and with the new twists this chapter, I'm very interested to see what becomes of her. 

Question, how long do you plan this story to be? I'm just curious... Sorry to hear that you're in pain. Wishing you a speedy recovery!

Wow! That was a surprise twist at the end, with the implied (but hopefully not really) demise of Niko. You are right about this being your longest chapter so far, and it was well worth the wait. Thank you for writing it.

The demise of Anton, on the other hand, is something I did expect to happen for a long time. On one hand, maybe this was long overdue considering what a creep he was, but then again there probably won't be another quite like him. That's mostly a good thing, but his weird and creepy obsession with Kristen had its uses for the development of the story.

It will be interesting to see how Parker handles the running of Crest now that Kristen appointed her to be Anton's successor. But I'm curious whether the people of Crest themselves will entirely accept the idea. They won't really have much choice if Kristen forces it on them, but Parker is an outsider from a different city and presumably a different world altogether. Will the culture of Crest allow them to accept an outsider (one whom their previous legitimate ruler wanted to kill too btw) as their new queen or whatever? Obviously they live under some monarchy steeped in tradition, and not only is Parker an alien, but she also isn't royalty. She certainly isn't their legitimate royalty. But of course Kristen can brute force her on them anyway whether they like it or not. Still, I think some of the Old Guard in Crest may offer up some resistance. If you're looking for ideas for "criminals" to be rounded up for Kristen's judgement, some Old Guard "Anton Loyalists" or whatever you want to call it in Crest is a suggestion. ;)

One thing I myself will miss about Anton is his creepy collection and veneration of things like Kristen's toe nail and so on. I don't think Kristen herself ever even knew about this stuff, so I'd be curious to see how she'd have reacted to it. BTW, this kinda sorta reminds me of a weird obsession which the former Libyan dictator Muammar Gaddaffi had with former U.S. Secretary of State Condoleeza Rice, where he had weird stuff about her in his compound and when she found out about it she was creeped out about it. That's the closest sort of real life analog I'm aware of of Anton and his Kristen obsession.

As the new queen of Crest, I guess Parker will inherit Anton's creepy collection of Kristen mementos. It will be interesting because she herself sorta venerates Kristen as a goddess (just as many tinies do), even if not to the same weird extent as Anton did. Maybe she would keep this stuff around? Or maybe its too much and she would dispose of it? It would be an interesting topic should she go into a voice call with Kristen and there is some giant toe nail or hair or whatever in the background which would then have to be explained. :)

That said, Parker has endured SO much. She really truly does deserve this break of being elevated to royalty, and as you wrote, she couldn't be worse than Anton at the very least, even if she sustained some brain damage. It will be interesting to see how things play out. Maybe you could have her get into contact with Justyna again? I think it would be cool for them to reconnect, only now as one "queen" to another. When Justyna first saw her, Parker was some giant soldier girl who saved her regime from being toppled by rebels and (unfortunately) literally pissed on her people; but now this humble military giant is the queen of a "sovereign" (in quotations because none of these cities are truly sovereign under Kristen's oppressive rule) realm, not completely unlike Justyna and her command of Ostrov. It would be quite a transformation and Justyna would probably marvel at it.

I assume that micros and nanos can send transmissions to one another between the rooms, right? And if not, then maybe its something Kristen could facilitate through an inter-room video conference. Either way that would be cool and hope it happens.

As for Justyna... her pregnancy is a major plot development to say the least. While this wasn't something I was expecting, it does make perfect sense given the amount of like non-stop fucking that she and Niko were doing. Again, I hope he isn't dead even though that was strongly implied at the end... if he is dead it would be something Justyna would most likely never be able to forgive Kristen for. Obviously this is the sort of thing Justyna does NOT need to go through right now, especially with the enormous complication of being pregnant. This is going to be a very tough time for her and I hope she'll make it, but man... this is some really rough shit.

If the micros and nanos didn't have enough legit reason to hate Kristen already, then this chapter in particular gives them plenty of further reason. She was a real major bitch in this chapter. Possibly moreso than in any other chapter to date so far. Destroying an entire city just because they didn't vote the way she wanted them to was just petty and childish, you know? Its the sort of thing you'd expect a 7 year old child like Maddie to do if she were in charge, but not a 35 year old grown woman. No excuse for it, quite frankly.

And also those cities she destroyed in the nano room. Whether or not she killed Niko, she definitely did kill numerous people just by being a petty childish bitch. So yes, any hatred that tinies hold towards her is very much justified in my opinion. Especially now, because she is transforming into a cruel psychopathic bitch. Its been a huge change from where she was at the start of the story.

Justyna is absolutely right for not wanting to bring a child into "her world" (referring to Kristen). I'd imagine most tiny women in the rooms would feel similarly on the matter. The birth rates among the tinies is probably really low, while meanwhile their death rate is catastrophically high. This doesn't bode well for them surviving until Maddie can be introduced to them as an adult.

Even as a psychopath who doesn't care about the lives of the tinies at all and only cares about her daughter above anything else, I still think a case could be made that Kristen shouldn't want to get too destructive and would want to keep them going just for Maddie's sake, right? If a whole city or multiple cities get snuffed out per chapter and at the same time few tinies are being born, then there's not going to be anything left for Maddie to inherit and be a goddess over. Does Kristen want to deny that experience to her daughter? So that's one way to look at it even if she has no empathy at all whatsoever for the tinies. She should still want to preserve them for Maddie's sake, right?

But I do hope that Kristen has some empathy for the tinies in her, or at least some empathy for some of the tinies, like Justyna. Enough to pull her back from the precipice of this cruel monster she is fast becoming. Maybe this development of Justyna's pregnancy is the sort of development that save her from falling further into that abyss?

I would think it might remind her of herself when she was pregnant on that night all those years ago when the tinies were teleported into the rooms. Does Kristen really want to be a cruel monster to Justyna, this woman who she should be able to relate to in this matter because she herself was like that once?

Again, I hope that Niko survived (somehow), but if that isn't the case it would make the child in Justyna's belly all that much more important, because it would be the last thing she has left of Niko, and he didn't want her to terminate it. Yet it also makes sense to not want to bring a child into a world ruled a giant psychopath, so this definitely puts Justyna between a rock and a hard place. I'm not sure how you'll navigate through it but I'm very interested to see how this develops. Personally I hope she does keep it, and I also hope Kristen dials back on the evilness at least enough so that Justyna wouldn't regret her decision.

If you are open to suggestions, I have an idea on how you could navigate this sensitive issue without making things too controversial. I know you don't want to write about children in this story, but unfortunately many children have inevitably been subjected to all the cruel abuses that the adults have. But I have an idea how you could cut that down to a minimum or even completely eliminate it. Just have Kristen setup some safe area for children, pregnant women, and those who care for them. Just like how she divided that one city up into a city for males and females. She could do the same in order to protect children so they don't end up dying, or getting exposed to her masturbating, or whatever which children shouldn't be frankly. This safe designated area probably shouldn't even be within the rooms anyway. That way anything she or her friends do in the rooms it would be guaranteed that no children would be harmed by it. It could be inside of a locked jewelry box in her bedroom or something, and inside they would have all the amenities and not lack for anything, but most importantly is that they would be safe. As a mother herself, this is something Kristen should see as a priority. Then when those children reach adulthood, they can be taken back to their respective people in the rooms or something like that.

If you want to eliminate all interaction with children, that's how you can do it. At the same time, this would increase the birthrate of the tinies because they would feel more assured about it. In fact, women might deliberately seek to get pregnant just so they can escape to the safety and luxury of this place from that harsh world they have endured the past 7 years. And now that the security force has come into existence, it would allow this to be carried out more seamlessly. But yes this is a difficult thing to navigate, but if you want my suggestion on this, that would be it. Most people will agree that children should be protected. Even evil psychopath Kristen might be able to spare some empathy for the children in the rooms at the very least, and spare them from her shenanigans. And like I said this is also important for the long term survival of the tinies, because if they keep dying and not being born then that would be a genocide. So again, she should try to avoid that for Maddie's sake at LEAST, right?

One more thing on this topic... if Justyna does keep her child this would have some interesting possibilities when things jump ahead years into the future when Maddie becomes an adult and gets introduced to the rooms. Hopefully Justyna and Ostrov and so on manage to survive until that point, and if Justyna's child is born and survives until then too then she could retire from being the leader of Ostrov and hand the office over to her (now adult) child. It would be kinda like Kristen and Maddie, but from the opposite perspective of those who live at their feet. We see how people who were born in a normal reality struggle to cope with this situation, but seeing how those who were born and raised in that situation handle it would be interesting. I also hope Maddie and Justyna's child could become friends similarly to how Kristen and Justyna are. Or maybe "friend" isn't the right word given Kristen's cruel treatment of Justyna in this chapter... but I dunno. Let's call it a working relationship or something?

You know, its kinda funny how Maddie threw her bratty tantrum over how impatient she was to see what is in the rooms. It won't be until many years from now that she will find out how fortunate she truly is. She doesn't know it yet, but she won the proverbial jackpot by getting to become a goddess (assuming things survive until then); it would have been far more likely to ended up as one of those unlucky children born in the tiny rooms. Maddie thinks its "so unfair" she doesn't get to go into those rooms. Wait until she does get to go in there, and then she will understand who REALLY has it unfair. Hopefully she won't be as much of a bratty psychopath as her mother, but her behavior in this chapter doesn't bode well... :(

Poor Justyna's unborn child (and all the others in Ostrov and the cities). They're the ones who REALLY have it unfair, and if they throw tantrums like Maddie did, they at least have every right to feel that way in my opinion. Its a shitty situation. But I gave my suggestion on how it could be handled to make it a lot less shitty for them anyway.

Oh! Another thing... you know how this all started 7 years ago with that storm teleporting those cities into the rooms when Maddie was born? Well, Justyna's pregnancy has given me a really crazy idea. Bear with me here... but what if something just like that were to also happen for Justyna on the day when her child is born? What I mean to say is... what if a bunch of even smaller cities, a country or two, etc... get teleported into rooms within Justyna's palace? Like I said that would be a CRAZY idea, but wouldn't that be COOL? :) Then we could see if Justyna would fall into the same abyss of psychopathy as Kristen and her friends, OR if she'd be better than that. It would put the matter to the test. It would let her see Kristen's perspective on things. It would also (maybe) give her some much needed stress relief (?). And also something she could one day pass down to her own child.... if things manage to last. Would be really weird to have tiny cities/countries inside of rooms within another tiny city/country that in turn is inside of a giant room. Not only would these tinies have Justyna the goddess to worry about, but an even larger goddess ontop of that. I don't know... weird idea, but it would be cool in my opinion. :)

Anyway, that's my longwinded review/rant on your epic and likewise long chapter. Keep up the great work!

I hope you're better now from your accident and I'm glad you're back in the story, I loved the chapter I finally know why there were so few Ginny followers and when Kristen finds out she could punish all of Crest. I didn't think there would be survivors from Climax City although their existence was brilliantly resolved. I hope there are more stories about those who are wandering around the other cities. I loved Rasha's triumphant return. She will surely contribute a lot to the story, although I don't know how you'll do it. Hehe.
On the other hand, I wanted to know if you're going to cover stories about the children in the cities about what they think or the difficulties they live in the situation they're in, or how their parents explain to them when they ask them why she's huge or if she hates them or something like that. Will there also be a "Goddess Day" or ceremony to commemorate the day they communicated with her or does it only celebrate the city of Crest? but these are just questions you're the writer and your story is excellent as is.

Author's Response:

Still going to be a very long time of recovery unfortunately but thank you.  Yeah, I was waiting for the Ginny followers thing for a while, we will see how if at all Kristen finds out, could be exciting.  I would love to explore some more random stories in another upcoming interlude.  I try not to write about children victims, it def makes it harder to do so and I don't want to be flagged for anything. I think it would be cool to explore how a parent handles it, we'll see.  

Intense! Another great chapter, and looking forward to how Rasha interacts with the micros, and especially the nanos. I can't tell how she would feel about all of this. Maybe she'll be more gentle in her interactions than the rest? I wonder how her toe ring will come into play

So sorry to hear about your accident - I hope that all goes well with your recovery. 

This latest chapter was excellent! Hoping there will be a scene where a city or two have quite an encounter with Rasha's feet.