[Report This]Date: September 16 2022 1:23 PM Title: Chapter 1
Honestly it's a tragedy that this story has not been reviewed. Incredible work getting into the characters for this one--Marin reads like a dream, from capturing her expressiveness to her mannerisms to her personality. Certainly helps that I enjoy her intensely, so amazing choice there--but there was so much that you did to fully bring her to life in this story. It's also always amazing to see a story that highlights some more minor characters from any series, and seeing Shinju as a giantess felt like an amazing choice.
Should you decide to make a sequel to cover what might be happening all night, I for one would read it immediately.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! There are no favorites among your children... but I loved this story so much. The anime and manga captured me and drew me in with Marin and her so extravagant yet down-to-earth personality, so I was really nervous to capture that in this as well. Also, Shinju as a giantess, playfully messing with her sister, it just felt right and I had to run with it :D
I do have a sequel planned for this story, though I initially wanted to wait to write it to celebrate a second season of the anime but now I'm getting impatient for it lol