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Reviewer: JinchuurikiJay26 Signed [Report This]
Date: April 21 2024 6:33 AM Title: Chapter 16 - Clitoris climbing

WOOOHOO !! Thank you so much for updating and continuing this wonderful story Unknown893 ! This has been the best thing on the site in years ! 

And this chapter was GOLD especially the terrorist part ! Love SO much how you revealed other things have invaded her ass and tits ! That's so hot ! And even Ants ?! I would love so much if you show us how that happened! Love how Ameila is always unaware of this stuff or even when suffering isn't sure why. Hope the next update is soon !

Reviewer: Maliardo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 15 2024 10:44 PM Title: Chapter 15 - Revenge of the anus

Hope this continues. It is gold.

Reviewer: Storyreader21 Signed [Report This]
Date: June 02 2023 8:30 PM Title: Chapter 15 - Revenge of the anus

Nice. I really hope it eats both Michelle and Ashley in a very permanent way.

Reviewer: lb54 Signed [Report This]
Date: April 28 2023 5:02 AM Title: Chapter 14 - Sleeping beauty

I'm really hoping for a return to clit, coaxing it out of it's shell while she's sawing logs. See if she ends up having some sweet dreams that night ;)

Reviewer: iluvvore Signed [Report This]
Date: March 30 2023 3:53 AM Title: Chapter 14 - Sleeping beauty

Words cannot begin to describe how much I love this story, each chapter. I'm happy we're returning to some pussy too (ps thank you so much for the digestion chapters too!!!) Please keep it up!!!! (Maybe a sex dream incoming? Hehe) 

Reviewer: JinchuurikiJay26 Signed [Report This]
Date: March 03 2023 2:10 PM Title: Chapter 12 - Return of the Pussy

Aww i REALLY hope they get to return back to the buttcheeks eventually please =( I loved all we got with her anus but they never got to really enjoy and walk on Amelia's buttcheeks and explore it like they already did with her pussy already. I do love that there back but hope the buttcheeks get thier turn again Unknown893. Also hope my other big hope is that other body parts get explored that i am go into further detail in my other reviews im about to send


As for this chapter BEYOND awesome we got another update so fast ! =D your the best  ! and it was SO hot that Ashley once again shows why she's the best character and pulled that move that got the class moving foward again lmao LOVE how Amelia jumped out her seat and her buttcheeks clapped and jiggled because of it ! and loved when you mentioned all the things her anus has done for her including dealing with boys and men ogling her ass haha love that part!

Thank you so much Unknown893 ! and hey are you getting my PM's i've sent as well ? Really wanted to review and compliment directly to you. Keep being awesome !

Reviewer: JinchuurikiJay26 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 03 2023 12:15 AM Title: Chapter 11 - Amelia’s anal defenses

REALLY hope they do get to explore the buttcheeks as I've been wishing for that since the start of the story! i really want to the class to be able get off the bus like they been doing and get to have fun walking on Amelia's buttcheek land and do stuff to it please ! 

Alot of reviews are saying they hope the knife won't be felt but i hope so ! It goes with why i been LOVING Ashley the best character here lmao. Here being the unknown vip thats moving things along again would be so awesome haha. 

Really hoping for no deaths as that kinda would kill the mood of the story honestly since this has been such a blast of a field trip for the class and Mrs. Pennington

Still working on my other reviews especially my very long one on my favorite character of the story so wanted to get this new update review out beforehand though.

Reviewer: JinchuurikiJay26 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 03 2023 12:06 AM Title: Chapter 2 - Ladies and Gentlemen, Her

So sorry I've been busy and haven't been able to send the rest of my reviews on each chapter Unknown893 but trying to continue with those as i have so much to say! Considering this second chapter reveals Amelia herself i'll review on that along with Mrs. Pennington. 

Youve done such an incredible job with Amelia. I LOVE how she is this very adorable, beautiful girl that is really sweet BUT is so sexy and has a big booty and love that you continuously mentions how her butt and boobs giggle all the time and even moreso how you have Mrs. Pennington insult her and refer to her as a thot as well lol! It's hilariously good and just love how you made their teacher a perfect mix between someone like Ms. Frizzle but someone who has devious and dark side. love it !

But as much as i love these two I can't wait to talk about my actual favorite character of the story in the next chapter though and I bet you can guess who hehe.

Reviewer: Storyreader21 Signed [Report This]
Date: March 02 2023 4:55 PM Title: Chapter 11 - Amelia’s anal defenses

Nice. I hope the knife is insignificant, and the anus wins. Extra points if Katie is the only survivor, but spends the rest of her life living on/in Amelia's body. Looking forward to the next chapter.

Reviewer: bledthorn Signed [Report This]
Date: March 02 2023 4:18 AM Title: Chapter 11 - Amelia’s anal defenses

My guess is no effect and she's pulled out of the bus and swallowed whole by her anus

Reviewer: iambeowulf Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 02 2023 3:41 AM Title: Chapter 11 - Amelia’s anal defenses

AMAZING work! Missed you! Btw, do you take story requests?

Reviewer: microscopic boy Signed [Report This]
Date: September 08 2022 10:49 AM Title: Chapter 10 - Camp nethers

This story is one of the best stories I have ever read.

Is it possible for the students to communicate with Amelia and explore the rest of her body with her knowledge?

Reviewer: Storyreader21 Signed [Report This]
Date: August 29 2022 8:55 PM Title: Chapter 10 - Camp nethers

Nice. I hope the fact that she is home alone, means she will meet up with a boyfriend and the bus gets brought along with the 'fun time'

Reviewer: iambeowulf Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 13 2022 10:44 AM Title: Chapter 9 - Tickling the girl’s beast

Amazing work so far! Btw, do you take requests? I messaged you about it and no response!

Reviewer: JinchuurikiJay26 Signed [Report This]
Date: June 12 2022 7:23 AM Title: Chapter 1 - The beginning

THIS.STORY.IS.GOLD Unknown893 ! I can't express it enough how freaking awesome this story is. I wanted to send my reviews for a good while know but been busy. There's so much i wanted to say. As an unaware fan and body exploration fan since I was a kid from watching Magic School Bus this is one of the best type of stories i could ever ask for ! From the characters and your insanely great detials in POV and etc. There's more I've got to say trust me but thank you Unknown893 for this ! 

Reviewer: Storyreader21 Signed [Report This]
Date: April 06 2022 1:59 AM Title: Chapter 5 - Hot and bothered

Nice. Is it bad that I hope Ashley died, but Katie lived(I'm hoping she either ends up living in Amelia's Womb, or is a survivor). Dont really care what happened to Jim and Dave though. By the way is it bad that I hope some kills Mrs. Pennington in a very embarrassing way?

Reviewer: Da Boss Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 05 2022 9:39 PM Title: Chapter 4 - A plump paradise

You’ve done a fantastic job with this story so far.  The set up, the details, everything.  Well done and keep it up!  Looking forward to whatever you do next! 



Author's Response: Wow I’m blown away! Thank you so so so SO very much! I’ve always been a huge fan of your stories. Seeing this has really made my day! 

Reviewer: mimiru888 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 05 2022 5:52 PM Title: Chapter 1 - The beginning

Enjoying what you've written so far, can't wait to read more!

Hope there's also some booty action in the future for these special explorers! :P



Author's Response:

Hey thanks so so much! I’ve really enjoyed reading your stories. They are absolutely fantastic and perfect in every way possible! Your comment really means a lot so thank you so very much!

And don’t worry! There will be plenty of booty action in the story. I can personally guarantee you that 100%!

Reviewer: SWlover Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 05 2022 1:16 PM Title: Chapter 1 - The beginning

Great start so far! I'm liking this story already and I definitely look forward to what comes next



Author's Response:

Really REALLy do thank you for this wonderful comment! I'm so very glad you like it!

Reviewer: iambeowulf Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 05 2022 9:57 AM Title: Chapter 1 - The beginning

Pretty solid so far! Keep up the good work!

Author's Response:

Thank you so so much! That really does mean a lot!!



Author's Response:

Thank you so so much! That really does mean a lot!!

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