[Report This]Date: March 21 2023 4:23 AM Title: Secret Origins
Just wanted to say, I am totally into this world building and the characters in this story, ava kind of like a low budget batman without the riches and Ultra woman is just super girl, anyway seeing as ava just got recruited by ultra woman will we see more of this hero League next chapter or ultra woman mentoring ava before ava move to the Big City, also seeing as not all villains and heroes are bad in this universe more like actors who fight and talk mostly, will we see more characters or is it going to be mainly these four.
Author's Response:
If I continue this one we'll see some other characters, heroes and villains in this universe are a mixed bag, some are super dangerous and evil and some are basically glorified pranksters like Maisie, Ultra Woman is a super commercialized Homelander type but she's also not a psychopath and does her best to save everyone, Ava obviously wants to be Batman but doesn't have the cash lol.
[Report This]Date: June 01 2022 6:36 AM Title: Secret Origins
Omg I wasn't expecting this to be as absolutely adorable as it was! I enjoyed it so much that I actually went ahead and made an account to leave a comment lol
Really excited to see what sorts of things you write next!
Author's Response:
Thanks! A lot of my stories have a pretty positive dynamic between the main characters. I intend to come back to Rise of a Supervillain one of these days, but I've got a lot of ongoings that I hop between.
Date: April 12 2022 5:48 AM Title: Secret Origins
A villain who is a lovable dork and a heroine who plays along and looks out for her. I'll admit I wasn't expecting this to be as wholesome as it was. Plus it had its exciting (and lewd) moments too. You have a way with storytelling.
Author's Response:
Thanks! If you like more plot heavy giantess stories you might check out my Conquest of Earth series, it's got a similar mix of lewdness, action, and drama, though it's a sci-fi tale rather than one with superheroes. I'll probably return to Rise of a Supervillain at some point.
[Report This]Date: March 27 2022 11:45 AM Title: Secret Origins
I don't often write reviews but wow this story is amazing. I just love the two main characters and I'm honestly going to be coming back to this site daily just so I don't miss the next installment. Really really awesome story.
Author's Response:
Thanks! Hope you liked the conclusion to the latest arc!
[Report This]Date: March 23 2022 4:20 AM Title: Secret Origins
Very fun story, well written and I could feel the enjoyment the author must have writing it through the feel of the story.
Author's Response:
I did have a good time, glad people are having fun with it too
Date: March 21 2022 8:52 PM Title: Secret Origins
A very wholesome story, you don’t see too many of these on this kind of stuff either. It’s fun, light hearted and takes itself not too seriously. Keep going, this is a very nice start for what could be a more slice of life style fun.
Author's Response:
Thanks, the Impossible Duo are definitely on the lighthearted side of the comic book spectrum. While this world has edgier heroes and villains obviously Sam and Maisie aren't among their number.
[Report This]Date: March 21 2022 5:09 AM Title: Secret Origins
Very wholesome, would love a part 2
Author's Response:
And you've got it!
Date: March 18 2022 10:46 AM Title: Secret Origins
Amazing storytelling, and wonderfully written. I hope you continue this and keep their relationship growing!
Date: March 16 2022 1:08 AM Title: Secret Origins
Gotta say this story was really fun to read, reminds me to a story in giantesscity name G and Me about a guy who falls in love with Giganta in the DC universe.
Author's Response:
Thanks, Giganta was definitely an influence.
[Report This]Date: March 15 2022 4:58 PM Title: Secret Origins
This and "We Help Each Other Get By" are some of the most adorable stories I have read on this site. I definitely think you should add more to this since this one chapter lays a pretty decent foundation to set up a much grander plot. At first I was a little skeptical about the protagonist getting powers since I liked the contrast in the regular guy and superhuman dynamic, but this is still great. Love this story and hope to see more!
Author's Response:
Well, the twist is that the titular supervillain was actually Sam. I'll have to think of some grander plots for these two then, I guess to continue the normal vs supervillain contrast we might see how Sam's friends and family react to his new "career" and his supervillain girlfriend.
[Report This]Date: March 15 2022 2:41 PM Title: Secret Origins
With Maisie's personality being so bubbly and friendly, I was expecting Ultra Woman's to be like Homelander; friendly up front, total psycho behind the scenes. Glad to see that wasn't the case. She has a soft spot for Impossible Woman because of Maisie's complete regard for the safety of people in her plans. I'm sure this is probably pretty rare for a villain, perhaps even unique.
Author's Response:
I think that Ultra Woman is definitely more cynical behind the scenes, but not to the point where she's a maniac. Impossible Woman is, to a hero at least, pretty much the ideal villain. Fun to fight and low risk, probably can be counted on in a real emergency.
[Report This]Date: March 15 2022 8:11 AM Title: Secret Origins
My only complaint would be not having more of this. The entire story was really adorable and the whole thing with the hero being soft on Maisie was just cute ash. I can already imagine an anime like this. Idk if you’ve heard of Vtubers but there’s one named Pekora who’s personality matches Maudie’s perfectly. I want more!
Author's Response:
Thanks! I'll have to think up some more plots with these two since people seem to want more.