Date: April 09 2022 6:11 PM Title: A Pleasurable Night For Two
Love this story. Few authors sort of get me like this. It's frustrating because this site has a few good authors and a bunch of other people writing like lists. This is very much the opposite. This is a story!
I made this account to leave a few reviews and this is one of them. wanted to tell you to keep writing and ill keep reading!
Date: March 14 2022 5:56 PM Title: A Pleasurable Night For Two
Okay, so, I'm going to gush a little here. I'm probably one of the pickiest authors on this site, but I loved this c:
You have absolutely excellent foundations. You've only put out a few pieces, but you already seem to have a pretty good grasp on general syntax which is wonderful! Most authors take a little while to reach that point. (I certainly did) Also, I noticed you favor emotional writing, which, I live for in any piece of media, but smut especially. Makes it that much hotter <3
The themes are great too, humiliation, dehumanization, all fantastic and stuff that is very much meeee!
But more than anything, I adore the sapphic vibe you have with this story! A good amount of smut tends to end up with a very objectifying tone or gaze, and I end up feeling gross either during or after reading. And you avoid it entirely here.
Totally looking forward to seeing you grow as a writer!