[Report This]Date: October 30 2016 3:13 PM Title: Chapter 1
Very Entertaining! Love Stories Of Giant Couples
& Cheating / Revenge Scenarios Plus Humiliation.
Date: June 15 2013 4:32 AM Title: Chapter 1
Keep up the good writing, love it
[Report This]Date: September 24 2012 8:57 AM Title: Chapter 1
so glad to see this back! thanks so much for updating, it was an awesome chapter. you're really putting melanie through the ringer!
[Report This]Date: June 06 2012 4:46 PM Title: Chapter 1
I thoroughly enjoyed this story and I hope you continue. Im hoping you start to go towards more x-rated content, such as melanie hiding in Anne's vagina, or her being there when Anne and Josh have sex. And hopefully some bathroom events, maybe like being stuck in the toilet. Phenomenal so far.
[Report This]Date: September 14 2009 3:16 AM Title: Chapter 1
Can't wait to read more...
Date: August 27 2009 2:04 PM Title: Chapter 1
very very enjoyable story! hopefully you'll continue soon!
Date: August 23 2009 9:57 PM Title: Chapter 1
story is starting to come around. sounds great keep it up : )
ps could you possibly write another story were guy shrinks to 'bout 2"-3" tall. bye
Date: August 07 2009 1:59 PM Title: Chapter 1
I hope this story gets finished. I agree with others, this is a most promising unaware story.
[Report This]Date: May 13 2009 4:23 PM Title: Chapter 1
Great stuff. Can't go wrong with good unaware writing. Please continue.
Date: May 12 2009 10:27 PM Title: Chapter 1
I said end it with some unaware vore. Or better yet, how about having him cheat on her and somehow. She lands on his dick and gets swallowed by the other girl. :-) LOL
Date: May 07 2009 1:51 PM Title: Chapter 1
I agree with the reviewers. I've been enjoying the story so far. I would of course, try to get you to throw in a scene where she gets stuck inside a burger and almost eaten by someone, but that's because it's my thing(Actually, I would like her to be really eaten, but I don't think you want that, so I'm just throwing it out therE)
Date: May 07 2009 12:40 AM Title: Chapter 1
More of the same would be awesome by me :), love the flats, feet detail, non-dominance is good for once, gentle feet would be nice :D, nice story keep it up!
[Report This]Date: May 06 2009 6:45 AM Title: Chapter 1
Great story! I love that she's unaware and I love the flats.
Date: May 06 2009 5:32 AM Title: Chapter 1
GREAT story!
I've never read a scenario like this and you write it beautifully.
Keep up the good work.
[Report This]Date: May 05 2009 7:38 PM Title: Chapter 1
Like they said, Great cant wait for the rest!
[Report This]Date: May 05 2009 3:31 PM Title: Chapter 1
I havent actually logged in to gtsworld in a while but i had to after i read this just to add it to my favorites and ask you to KEEP WRITING! great start.
Date: May 05 2009 2:52 PM Title: Chapter 1
Wow, I really liked the story, for this to be your first one, its very nice! I completely encourage you to keep writing, as I'm sure many people will start reading your stories the more you update them, keep up the awesome work!