Reviews For On the beach
Reviewer: kingkong89 Signed [Report This]
Date: August 24 2022 1:38 PM Title: Chapter 34 - Peaceful night on the city
Date: August 24 2022 1:38 PM Title: Chapter 34 - Peaceful night on the city
TOP STORY
Reviewer: Koss Signed [Report This]
Date: August 08 2022 2:54 PM Title: Chapter 34 - Peaceful night on the city
Date: August 08 2022 2:54 PM Title: Chapter 34 - Peaceful night on the city
Cant wait for the nexts chapters!!
Reviewer: Koss Signed [Report This]
Date: August 01 2022 11:02 AM Title: Chapter 34 - Peaceful night on the city
Date: August 01 2022 11:02 AM Title: Chapter 34 - Peaceful night on the city
Curious to see how Will Elsa calm her stomach, Will the city suffer much more?
Reviewer: writer27 Signed [Report This]
Date: July 25 2022 2:27 PM Title: Chapter 34 - Peaceful night on the city
Date: July 25 2022 2:27 PM Title: Chapter 34 - Peaceful night on the city
This is a strange perspective for a story but I find myself eagerly anticipating weekly new chapters. I also really like that you don't just write one chapter and drop three at a time. Keep it up nice work.
Reviewer: Koss Signed [Report This]
Date: July 25 2022 11:23 AM Title: Chapter 34 - Peaceful night on the city
Date: July 25 2022 11:23 AM Title: Chapter 34 - Peaceful night on the city
The evolution of the characters is incredible, never stops to surprise me, keep going this amazing story, is great!!!