Reviews For Summer Holiday
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Reviewer: liliannnwritesstuff Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 01 2022 8:22 PM Title: Chapter 1

Amazing story, I love Frederic's attitude and just how cruel the boys are to the poor tinies! I'd like to see a character who takes a bit longer to get past the moral implications of it in a later chapter if you want to write that.



Author's Response:

The story would probably repeat itself too much, but it's a good idea for a another one. Thank you very much.

Reviewer: timeturner Signed [Report This]
Date: February 21 2022 11:07 PM Title: Chapter 1

Great story! Maybe a little short but looking forward to seeing more from you



Author's Response:

It looks longer when you write it, thank you for pointing this out.

Reviewer: Questathana Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 21 2022 6:53 PM Title: Chapter 1

Love it



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