[Report This]Date: March 08 2022 3:46 PM Title: A New Home
I want to apologize, I guess I must have been really tired last night because when I clicked 5 out of 10 I was thinking it was five stars. So it looks like I gave you a two and a half on accident. I deleted the old review. I think you did just fine especially for somebody who isn't used to ride in that kind of thing
Author's Response:
I wouldn't worry about it. If someone gives one of my stories a low rating I either take it as a failing on my end in some respect, in which case I try to improve that, or maybe the story just wasn't what they were looking for, in which case all you can do is shrug and hope they find something that does make them happy.
[Report This]Date: March 08 2022 7:32 AM Title: A New Home
This was my favorite of all the chapters, I could something say on a lot of them(The first two with the Delinquents was my second favorite), but I'm going to just focus on this one.
I definitely think this chapter deserves 10 stars, and disagree with the rating of the other review. I think this was your strongest chapter that displayed the most humanity in your characters. It was really interesting seeing how Lauren and Zeke interacted and how Zeke began to overcome his prior experience. You didn't put in too much from his past and portrayed it pretty well.
On my own I've been writing a story with similar themes(but for college students, that will be released a while from now, it's 21K words right now and when it's done I'll be releasing it by chapter), and there's another story that has the main female character named Lauren(which is kind of slice of life like Kacey and Jake). Your writing has inspired me for my own. Of these chapters, I've reread this one a few times and each time have loved reading it.
I'd love a brief sequel of the two to see how they have progressed.
Author's Response:
I don't intend to come back to most of the stuff in here, although a lot of the ideas carry over into my longer stories. Looking forward to your story! Slice of life giantess stuff is always fun.